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Put Our Love Back In Your Mind
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Put Our Love Back In Your Mind |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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This is a song I wrote but I thought I'd post it here anyway.......ET Baby you don't know me, ever since I lost you and I'll never blame you cause, you went your way. But I been hopin that you'd greet me, with a teardrop in your eye but you always turn and look away. Now I know you'll find someone who will be true to you but even though I sinned he can't replace our time Chorus: Please block that heartache from your vision put your heart back where it's missin put our love back in your mind She was just a young girl and the minute she walked in I felt her searchin eyes fill up the room. Now I got these regrets bout what I should have done and I couldn't have left too soon. I can't even hate that someone who brought the truth to you but even though I sinned you can't replace our time. Please block that heartache from your vision put your heart back where it's missin put our love back in your mind. Bridge: How long must I wait for that deep hurt to leave you for love that made us one. got to think regrets come too soon. just how long baby will our love stay undone I was there when you were I'm so sorry girl for hurtin you. Please block that heartache from your vision put your heart back where it's missin put our love back in your mind Copyrighteltrue@E3B1G9/2001/Roach&Morris-Inc. The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to re-language historie [This message has been edited by ethome (edited 10-10-2001).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a sweet, melancholy song. I can almost here the tune. Lovely writing as always. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think this one would cause a few tears...it's wonderful! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much Karilea and Tracey.......I certainly appreciate your comments. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ethome--I miss your songs and poetry..so glad to read this heart break of blues from you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Put our love back in your mind." A very catchy line...I remember talking to a friend the other night and I told her "You can't make me love you...it must come from within my own thoughts and desires." James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
nobody sings them like you my friend. . . excellent!  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hiya Ethome, I gotta say this is one of my favorites you've shared with us... TERRIFIC sweetie... Very Very Very much enjoyed... *~coco~* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Hello friend~ Glad that you dropped in with this melodious post~ I enjoyed the read~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
The heartbreak and regret sings clearly through the lines in this tender piece Eric ... I would love to hear the melody behind this piece ... very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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