Open Poetry #16 |
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Count Me In |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia ![]() |
Count Me In Oh, don't worry about the sun going down It can't ever take away my mind's image of you No matter how hard the rain rides down my window pane It'll leave way for the sun to shine our whole life through... God, how I wish you could think of me without a tear stained pillow How I wish I could think of you without falling to my knees I just want to be your light when you lay your head at night Please don't let the sadness replace what you mean to me... You can be sure that I will find my way to you Even if it takes me my lifetime to get myself there For as long as the wind is willing to carry me again Then have no fear, dear one, you can count me in... You can include me to stand before the deepest water there is And, I will make it across with faith at my side I'm willing to ride the waves with every memory I've saved So, count me in that I'll reach you with each rising tide... You can count me in when the mountains seem even harder to climb For my destination is to lie with you on sunset's bed Nothing is high enough and not a bit too tough When a mother's child gives way to the distance ahead... I am weak to your thought but am strong to your need I'm on a mission to get what belongs to me So, don't you worry when a day must end Just count me in to bring us together again... Sauni Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"No matter how hard the rain rides down my window pane It'll leave way for the sun to shine" I really like where this one went. Thanks for sharing, Saunni. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful my friend. . . you've done well with this one. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
What delightful determination. Loyalty unparalleled. Great write. I really enjoyed this. Thanks Saunni. Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
BEAUTIFUL!!!! |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
saunni, this is such a beautiful and touching piece. ![]() cottage |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Your words are soft to the heart...a gentle coddling with inner strength. Willie B |
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