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Open Poetry #16

My torment

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-09 08:10 PM

Your love
sweet poison
that I drink
willingly
Only to suffer
in ecstasy
the torment
of knowing
that
you will never
love me
the way I want
to be loved

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-09 08:20 PM

YES!! I just love this! ~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

2 posted 2001-10-10 01:05 AM

that was very moving.
Heather (aka CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

3 posted 2001-10-10 05:48 PM

I really enjoyed this, but if I may....

That you will
neverlove me
the way that I need you to.

but I really did enjoy it the way it is.

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-10-10 05:51 PM

Very powerful!, gawd, this is my life right now!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-10-10 06:09 PM

Only to suffer
in ecstasy
===================

What a turn of phrase! Fabulous!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-10-10 06:51 PM

This happens to me every now and then...James

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