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Come to Me Now
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Come to Me Now |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Come to Me Now The night is swift, it passes like the wind And never pauses for a soft caress Nor listens to my sentiments within It simply comes and goes in quietness In slumbering dreams I pass the night away And waken to the dawn’s unwelcome light The sun has brought another lonely day And cruelly stolen yet another night I’ve missed the starlit sky, the evening balm The silver glow cast by a midnight moon For I still sing a melancholic song And sleep alone in darkness of my room Come to me now, my love, and stay with me And make my night a sweet eternity Elizabeth Santos |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sonnets know you by name...we know you by your heart... this is beautiful... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!!!!! Charisma |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Elegant. Lovely. Bob |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, An epopee. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is you, Liz, beautiful.... Regards, Sudhir |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh*. . . the Lady of the Sonnet has spoken yet again. . . in voice soft and clear. . . well done my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful sonnet, Elizabeth! Perfection once again! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A beautiful sonnet Liz, but maybe he would come quicker if you said "please"  try that, and let me know how it works will you?  ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Liz has no need to say please to anyone... The sonnet is perfect... |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sweet Dreams, Dear Liz... This is lovely - and I love you...  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you, dear poets, for your warming remarks. They are much appreciated. Liz |
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