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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-10-08 05:02 PM



Black Come Blue

~*Marge Tindal*~

The world held in her hands
Soft, pliable ... bouncing with expectation
Exploring the possibilities
through eyes that gaze in anticipation

Will this world offer to you
comfort of learning by knowing
that someone will give you the opportunity
to be fully growing ?

Little girl of black come blue
have they bruised the past far too much
for you to be reached
with gentle touch

O' child of wonder take my hand
I will try to lead you past the poverty
to a land rich with education, music,
art and poetry~


*A promise for Lakeisha
10/08/01

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2001-10-08 05:09 PM


Marge? Is THIS your girl?

You are a lovely person, and I agree with you, reach out and touch, one at a time, and leave them the legacy of that gift. YOU teach me that. Lovely YOU!!!

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2 posted 2001-10-08 05:10 PM



THIS will be a promise well kept...

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3 posted 2001-10-08 05:24 PM


Marge, very beautiful poem to a very beautiful little girl.   Enjoyed!
          ~hugs~

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

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4 posted 2001-10-08 05:24 PM


Serenity~
They are all my children ...
How I wish I could reach out and touch them all~
Just had one of my mentor students moved from an abusive home ...
and maybe now she will have an opportunity to know love, gentleness, and a chance to escape the confines of poverty.

I strongly believe in a program of exposure to the arts for all children~
I can only help one at a time ... but, if each of us helped just one ... what an outreach of love~

Karilea~
Thank you, love~
I will keep my promise for sure~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



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5 posted 2001-10-08 05:31 PM


And with your gifts of verse
and encouragement,
you are always giving
unconditional love,
the stuff that
dreams are made of.

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6 posted 2001-10-08 05:43 PM


SunshineMist~
Missed you in there, as we posted at the same time~
Thank you for the nice reply.

MidniteSun~
I will try~
Thank you for the kindness of your thoughtful reply~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2001-10-08 05:44 PM


Every time I reach a point where I know I can't admire you any more than I do, you go and show something like this about your beautiful soul and I know that my admiration for you is limitless..
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8 posted 2001-10-08 06:07 PM


Balladeer~
I will always strive to make sure admiration from you is well-earned.
Thank you, sweetest friend~
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~


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9 posted 2001-10-08 06:26 PM


Ahh, Marge, it seems she has one excellent keeper, but, very gentle smile, if she needs another, my fire is always lit for her. HUGS to you, little Goose
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10 posted 2001-10-08 06:41 PM


Logan~
Thank you~
She's six years old and has merely 'survived' for most of that time.
Now she will have a chance to 'grow'.

If you could have seen those eyes light up when she touched a piano key for the first time~
Oh .. how my heart filled with the joy of her.
There are so many more that need the one on one touch~
Bet there's another one close enough to you to be touched ~
Bless you~
*Hugs*
~*LittleGoose*~

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11 posted 2001-10-08 07:01 PM


Marge, this is so wonderful   (and....what Balladeer said   ) hugs and love to you  
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12 posted 2001-10-08 07:10 PM


This is utterly priceless. Reminds me of my daughter when she about this age.
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13 posted 2001-10-08 07:18 PM


SEA~
Thank you, hon~
I try~

LadyOfShallot~
Then you've certainly been blessed.
So glad you enjoyed it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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14 posted 2001-10-08 08:27 PM


Little girl of black come blue
have they bruised the past far too much
for you to be reached
with gentle touch

O' child of wonder take my hand
I will try to lead you past the poverty
to a land rich with education, music,
art and poetry~
=======================================

Margie.. this touches me in places deep for many reasons....
thank you for sharing this with us...
I wouldnt have wanted to miss this in my scattered abscence.......

its never too late to reach out and heal with love and patience
shes so very precious...and shes so lucky to have been placed in your nurturing hands.
Mother to many...friend to even more...
we learn so much from your example.

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15 posted 2001-10-08 08:34 PM


Marge,

My friend you are indeed a stunning poet/poetess (sp)

your work is priceless among these walls....
bless you....and peace to you

HUGS~



Lauren

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because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
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16 posted 2001-10-08 08:34 PM


Marge....You do have the most beautiful soul!!...not to mention a heart of gold.  Warm autumnal hugs to you, Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

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17 posted 2001-10-08 08:52 PM


Reaching one child at a time, providing love, hope and opportunity can make all the difference in the world. This is lovely, Marge.
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18 posted 2001-10-08 09:16 PM


JanetMarie~
You know that I am the one blessed at being able to help~
I thank you, dear lady ... and you know that~

GreenEyes~
I just wanted to share with the hope that others might consider 'making a difference' in the life of just one child.
Thank you for the kindness of your response.

Enchantress~
I think everyone has the capability of extending their heart to a child~
Thank you for the reply.

Denise~
That's exactly right~
It seems so little to give ... and makes such a difference.
I am richly rewarded with a hug or a smile~


***Thank you all for letting me share this with you~
I don't feel my heart is any larger than anyone else's ...
but shared with a child, it sure grows~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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19 posted 2001-10-08 10:06 PM


Your expression here must be very hard for you at times.... I'm sure You see many dark things in the lives of those precious children. I am so glad they have someone like you to show them new light. I pray they find the loving family they deserve and that deserves them. They are angels each one. I am so touched by both the poem and the picture. You amaze me.

Sincerely,
Regina

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20 posted 2001-10-08 10:59 PM


Marge, I love to see how much you love and are loved. You are a very special lady and deserve all that you get here and from those lovely children.


Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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21 posted 2001-10-08 11:06 PM


Oh, Marge, this was absolutely stunning!! The picture was adorable and your imagery sent a chill through my spine as I now worry for my nine year old daughter, Elysa.
Take care.......Sue

Suetang

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22 posted 2001-10-08 11:11 PM


Marge--If we could just take your heart, and give a piece of it to everyone (yes, it is that big) then the world WOULD KNOW peace.  Thank you for your beauty, dear sis!
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23 posted 2001-10-09 07:43 AM


RWood~
My expression comes from each new life that touches mine~
Thank you so much~

Dee~
Grandma was right ... the more we GIVE ... the more we GET~
I feel blessed with a whole lot of GET~

SueTang~
Elysa has YOU !  That's a whole bunch of love~
Thank you sweet lady~

Martie~
Sister-of-my-heart ... you are wonderfully kind~
I love you, gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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24 posted 2001-10-09 12:02 PM


Margie-gal... every life, young or old, that comes in contact with you knows what it is to be truly blessed... for the only thing that exceeds the beauty of your poetry is the beauty of the poet behind the pen.
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25 posted 2001-10-09 12:32 PM


Marge, this is such a touching poem... I am moved, my friend, by the ways of your words and the ways of your feelings... and by you...

Regards,
Sudhir

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SuthernGal~
You know how happy it makes me to see you here ??? VERY~
Thanks, sweet gal~

Sudhir~
Oh, thank you, my friend~
I am moved by your friendship~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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27 posted 2001-10-09 02:19 PM


I would like to say thank you for this poem that has touched a place in my heart and in my world.  It is an inspiration, and an encouragement to stay in the lives of some children I know.  Somedays I smile just because one of these kids gave me a hug, or thought to share their thoughts or successes with me, and so I know that you are making a difference.  For that I thank you too.

Carrie

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28 posted 2001-10-09 08:51 PM


ApacheCat~

'It is an inspiration, and an encouragement to stay in the lives of some children I know.'

With that statement ... you made my day !
To be able to encourage or inspire even one person to start, or to continue, to work with children is a blessing to me~
I thank you~

May you receive MANY, MANY more hugs~
Here's mine for starters ... *Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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29 posted 2001-10-10 12:01 PM


She's a stranger to paradise and you would open up a whole new world for her!  Fabulous write!
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30 posted 2001-10-10 12:12 PM


Right back at you ((((((((HUGS)))))))))


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31 posted 2001-10-10 02:48 PM


Well, Marge - I am speechless - You are indeed an incredible person.  May I bestow upon you an honor I don't give lightly?  Thank you.

I hereby appoint you, DEPUTY KITTY KICKER SUPREME

Now, don't go blabbing to everybody your new office title, as they will pester me for the same high honors, and I can bestow this honor upon only one person.

Incidently, I am very serious about my admiration for you.

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32 posted 2001-10-10 03:57 PM


Marge,
Your heart of gold is shining. I can't think of anyone better suited to spread some joy through music and poetry.
God bless you.

Deb

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Marge~ What a beautiful person you are!  You are such an inspiration to all who meet you and I have no doubt that you change the lives of many children...for the better.  Thank you for the beautiful expression of your heart and the soft message of love and compassion that will reach everyone, I am sure.  

Hugs for being you,
~Krista  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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34 posted 2001-10-11 02:43 AM


Marge, hugs from my heart 2u cuz we are all indeed truly blessed to have you in our life each day...

Hugs2UalwaysSweetPoetFriend
*~coco~*

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35 posted 2001-10-11 03:14 AM


I could have sworn I posted on this one already but it is not there, so I guess I pushed the wrong button again, but anyway, I wanted to say to you that if you had never done one other thing in your life (except you have), but touched the life of one child in a positive way, then you had done your job!  But I know you, this is ongoing so it comforts me to know that these children who brush by your heart are the upstanding citizens of tomorrow Marge.  And this was a beautifully sensitive poem.  ((hugs))

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

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36 posted 2001-10-11 04:52 AM


InterLoper~
Thank you so much dear sir~

ApacheCat~  

LongJohn~
Thanks for the read and reply~

BloomingRose~
Thank you sweet lady~
You know I appreciate you~

SmittenKitten~
Awwwwww !  Thanks very much, hon~

CoCoBaci~
I sure am glad to know you were here with such a sweet reply~

Mysteria~
Thank you.
If I can touch one in my little corner of the world, I'm sure others can and will do the same in theirs~
We CAN make a difference~
*Hugs* to all~
~*Marge*~

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37 posted 2001-10-11 06:29 AM


I do believe you have one of the warmest hearts I know Marge. These are such beautiful and inspiring sentiments ... and to know the reality behind the words, makes it simply that much more uplifting and heartfelt. Hugs to you sweet poet!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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38 posted 2001-10-11 08:47 AM


Margie, thank you for this lovely gift, and how can her life not be touched by someone as wonderful as you are Marge!  God Bless You!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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39 posted 2001-10-11 12:47 PM


Kit~
Thanks for the nice comments, sweet lady~
I honestly wear no halos, except the glow of her smile~

GentleSpirit~
Thank you, hon~
My heart is joyful just in knowing she gets a chance~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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