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A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-10-08 12:58 PM

The Gift of You….

Seized by poetic verse,
my heart revealed as you bestow your own…
I am immersed in the warmth of you…

the bleeding of your heart, and that of mine
flow as two barren rivers merge to
an ocean of discovery…

shown true passion, my heart leaps in a
new understanding of it’s own volume,
and in the gift of you,
my soul becomes known to me…

achildsheart
10-08-01
thank you....

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-08 01:12 PM

shown true passion, my heart leaps in a
new understanding of it’s own volume,
and in the gift of you,
my soul becomes known to me…
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This is lovely! I enjoy this style of writing myself. Thank you for this one.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

everafterhim
Junior Member

since 2001-10-08

Posts 24
Ohio, Pioneer

2 posted 2001-10-08 03:42 PM

Very good poem. I like it.
Tina L.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-10-08 03:47 PM

"The Gift of You" is your work, and it is beautiful

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-10-08 09:33 PM

this is a gift that should always be given. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2001-10-09 01:02 AM

shown true passion, my heart leaps in a
new understanding of it’s own volume

Great lines...love the poem.

cottage
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 138

6 posted 2001-10-09 01:51 AM

this is indeed a wonderful poem !

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

7 posted 2001-10-09 11:21 AM

thank you all for the kind responses.

This is meant to be a gesture of gratitude
for the poet who unveiled my creativity.

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

8 posted 2001-10-10 04:45 PM

Kewl. Lovely.

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