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Open Poetry #16

If I were a Star...

StarLiteRose
Junior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 20
Rose from the Sky

0 posted 2001-10-08 12:55 PM

If I were a star,
I would twinkle from afar.
It would be very bright
To give the world some light.
To help the whole world out
And be there without a doubt.

Give the world a hand
And be a better man.
Bright and shining I will be
To help the world be cheery.
If I were a star,
You know I wouldn’t be very far!

"The Stars shine bright and down upon me, the Rose of the Sky" -Me

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2001-10-08 01:26 PM

This is very good. I like this.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-10-08 01:44 PM

Please, little star, come and shine in my sky too.

everafterhim
Junior Member

since 2001-10-08

Posts 24
Ohio, Pioneer

3 posted 2001-10-08 03:09 PM

Yeah only if! That would be nice.
I love this work. Great Job!
Tina L.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-10-09 09:42 PM

what do you mean if????

wonderfully done. . .

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