Open Poetry #16 |
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Breakfast At Tiffany's |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Breakfast At Tiffany's Well now it wasn't me that was stumbling around in the club desiring all my attention. Pulling me onto the dance floor and demanding to dance every dance. Even after you realized I didn't speak that much French and had only spent one year in France. Still I have to admit I had lots of fun on that dance floor and those soft whisper's in my ear and French kisses kept me begging for more. So when you said "Hi I'm Tiffany can you take me home and tuck me into bed." I kept on dancing but was carefully considering those words you had said. Now as we awaken on this morning after we find ourselves sharing awkward moments in your bed. My jockey shorts long gone yet still where they lay and you in full possession of a hangover in red lingerie. So baby don't just sit there staring down at me. I'm ready for some breakfast in bed at Tiffany's. JamesLee October07 2001 |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
James, this sounds like a pretty good evening..And well done, some of the lines really jumped out at me. Sandra |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
interesting story indeed... *smiles* ~Tier |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
heeheehee shame on you James ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
James!! Is this based on fact? Like, did it really happen??? Enjoyed! ~Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I wonder what you might have tipped the staff. . . ![]() great job James. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LMAO. I can only imagine what was served at breakfast. OOH la la, vous etes tres funny! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sandra, Tiersden, Sea, Nancy, Sven and Midnitesun. I recently went to a local dance club with one of my friends and a lovely women was very friendly with me and I think this is what stirred up so old memories from long ago in a far off place and yes some of this is based on memories and some is fantasy...I leave those choices to you... For any that speak French and believe me I only know a little but I learned one phrase while I lived one year in France that I don't think I'll ever forget...and forgive my spelling...it's all French to me... Vous le vous coucher avec moi...which means...well I'll let those proficient in French interpret this for themselves...James |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I know what it means ![]() |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well, it's Greek to me, but I loved your story ![]() Oh, I can make and educated guess as to the interpretation ![]() |
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