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Topheth
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-10-07 10:54 PM

'Hope For The Sun'

Why does this discomfort enter my heart?

That desire to be with you each time we’re apart
is entwined with uncertainty that we’ll ever be one,
is fueled by the nagging question of when.
We speak of the answers, discuss ways and means,
days become weeks and the weeks are what seems
to hold us together dancing ‘round in the night.

But I hope for the sun and the warmth of its light.

[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 10-07-2001).]

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Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

1 posted 2001-10-07 11:00 PM

Nice sweet and touching
LITL,
Heather (aka CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-10-08 06:15 PM

this is so beautiful, but so sad too. Here's hoping you see the sun and feel the warmth of your love

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2001-10-08 08:09 PM

But I hope for the sun and the warmth of its light.

Absolutely lovely in it's sadness.

Maree

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2001-10-08 08:36 PM

Nicely done...

enjoyed!

~Tier

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-10-08 08:42 PM

Jeph, this is so lovely...although sad.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-10-08 09:29 PM

It's OK to hope for the Sun...she always knows when to bid you a good night's adieu...

Enjoying your writings...keep it up!

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