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Jealousy |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Now I feel this urgent need Pen in hand instead of read Too long dry Tears in my eye But words wish will not heed Softly crying this pain I feel Scoff not at me, I fear tis real Wish now a word My voice unheard End thus silent ordeal Jealous of the words you write I read them here night after night How many more As I keep score My verse now seems so trite |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I would imagine it is usually the other way around.. I know for me it is...  There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
NEVER. Don't know what you've been reading, but Shar? you could never be trite. And it's only natural that a pen make a writer hungry. Smiles and love you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon- I have to echo serenity. Nothing trite about your verse, my friend. I always enjoy reading the wonders that spill from your pen. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Trite? Nuh uh....there is no need for you to be jealous! This poem was awesome. ~Krista  |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Interesting....Although I did read once that you are not your poetry so I am going to take this as one of your magnificent writings! Love it Cindi |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Me too, I am with Cindy, a great poem about someone somewhere, and extremely well done to catch the emotion too! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
AH! Now this one IS about me...I see you all writing along, posting poems daily and I am very jealous. I'm in a big writing slump and can't get my thoughts together to write.. Thank you for your kind words...if you could just send me some inspiration I'd appreciate it! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
when lack of inspire becomes an ire think of thoughts that would transpire and heed not the lack of word for in the end 'tis your voice heard... Tell it "not" to come, and it will bang down your door. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Maybe Lady's reverse psychology will work. Even when you're not writing...you're not writing better than most anyone I know! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Seems I am not the only one with block. *sigh*. This does not comfort me though. I always enjoy your verse so. Marilyn |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
like I've said before. . . everyone writes at their own pace. . . some all the time, some take longer with theirs. . . no need to be jealous though. . . believe me. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
if you feel your muse is resting, your muse will return, think of it as being renewed or on vacation and I don't think you have anything to be jealous of! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Nothing you write, could ever be 'trite'.. You've given much more than you've taken... And there have been times, when just reading your lines, has helped me feel much less forsaken! Love your writing, my friend....always have, and this one is no exception!!  The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Methinks that trite is NOT an accurate description at all... besides, you've got good stuff happening at home to distract you...  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
poet devine o yuh! |
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