Open Poetry #15 |
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The Tale? |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
A princess, gnomes and even a troll, add a Viking, strong and bold. From ghostly mists dragonships creep, out of hidden fjords, icy and deep. From land of birth, they could not stay, the Viking could wait for another day. The gentle princess he had to protect, his liege had chosen him in select. Battle cries with clashes, still rang in his ears, as he spirited her away, eyes washed with tears. Her family gone, now all alone, but for the Viking and crew who would atone. Many an adventure came their way, from mountain top to underground stay. Oceans they sailed in their unending quest, to place their princess in her home nest. The princess and Viking became very close, and then one day….. The speaker paused and gave a smile, telling the crowd that was all for a while. Surely only a tale, he heard being said, he laughed outloud, tossing back his head. Believe what you wish of the nature of things, past lives and loves are of what I sing Sing I may of what is now ancient dust, but people did live, even if the swords do rust. Maybe it is true and maybe it is not, that people will meet that never forgot. So is it a tale that only I say? Or one I lived that very day. With those parting words, he walked away. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Logan......this is fantastic ![]() I hope you share more of this ![]() "Believe what you wish of the nature of things, past lives and loves are of what I sing" that is my favorite part ![]() |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Sing more! I love it ![]() ~Krista ![]() "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Can't wait for part II. ![]() Is a wondrous story Logan. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my wee one and I are going to love reading this one out loud tomorrow, thanks Logan, and you know I love fairytales, any fairytale will do, keep them coming! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Logan- What a wonderful story you've penned. Well done, poet friend.. ![]() hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In this song of Viking lore you have opened portal's door to a season's quest for all time come back soon with chant of rhyme |
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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
You should create an "epic of tales" and give the viking a name. loved it... peace love and understanding...wpwpoet |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Enjoyable and luring... I especially like the unexpected "story-teller twist" at the end, along with the questioning of what is reality, really? Eager for more, Logan -- you have a knack with tales and lore... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
What a lovely heartfelt song, my gentle friend. A love a good fairy tale. Thank you for sharing! ![]() All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Most entertaining, my friend. Greatly enjoyed this one. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sing I may of what is now ancient dust, but people did live, even if the swords do rust. Maybe it is true and maybe it is not, that people will meet that never forgot. So is it a tale that only I say? Or one I lived that very day. With those parting words, he walked away. ============================================ Your fans are begging for more ... Seems we cant get enough of your visions ![]() well done poet sir. jm slow burn ... |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Shivers...one of my favorite kinds or poems!! Thank you for sharing this ![]() Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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