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Raindrops Of Remember
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Raindrops Of Remember |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~Raindrops Of Remember~  parched lips so often thirsting for your kiss recall a time entangled in such bliss this arid heart sustained with reminisce once filled with love now lost in vast abyss we crossed the bridge of love and paid the toll now memories are all that will console desolation reigns within my soul I pray the rains will come and make me whole so let the storm clouds burst till my heart has been submersed then shower me with raindrops of remember ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-27-2001).] |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
we crossed the bridge of love and paid the toll Your words relate the cost too well! |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Oh vicky, I know this one too well...very well done! I hope that you can find what you are looking for! Love ya sis Cindi |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Vicky, this is beautiful....sadly we all must pay the toll at times. I love the ending....really pulls at the ol' heartstrings! ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very Beautiful Vicky  loved every line, but especially these..... "then shower me with raindrops of remember" Maree |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Beautifully expressed VL I truly enjoyed this read and I thank you... Hugs2UpoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Vicky the title alone says it all, nicely done. ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vicky, this is perfect |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ You knew I'd like this piece~ How lovely your thoughts. You are driven with such inspiration ... really well-presented, poetess. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Very nicely written! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah yes, one of my favorite movies, and you have captured the feel of this so very well! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Exquisitely written...enjoyed the read... Nathan |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Ah, love in the rain...saturated in love. Good poem girl! Hugs, Deb |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
JLR- Thank you...glad you like it. Cindi- Not really 'looking' for anything...just remembering. Thanks, sis...love you too.  Krista- Thanks so much. Glad this one touched you. Maree- My favorite lines too.. Thanks so much, my friend.. CocoBaci- Thank you, my friend.. Happy you enjoyed! Sharon- Thanks much, sweet friend. Love and hugs to you. SEA- Wow! You just made my day! Thanks so much, my friend.  Marge- YOU, my friend, are a big part of that inspiration! Thanks so much for sharing your inspirational thoughts with me. So happy you enjoyed this! Love you much! Kirksters- Thanks much, my sweet friend.. hugs to ya Sunshine- I'm so glad you enjoyed! Your responses always make me smile. Nate Dogg- Thanks so much for reading. Happy you enjoyed! Deb- Thanks much, sweet friend. I just LOVE rain, and love in the rain is even better. Hugs back at you! hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
Oh Vicky! This is gorgeous!!! Very nicely done! Isn't it amazing what the sweet kiss of true love can do to us??? Luv ya babe Tanya Dance like nobody is watching |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
how did I miss this?? this forum is moving too fast for my slow *** LOL what a cool poem... I love your rhyme scheme and cadence. wonderful poetic turn of phrase as well. great job Vicky slow burn ... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Vicky~ A classic bittersweet recall laced with wonderful flow, images and rhyme further enhanced with a perfect presentation Well done!~Melissa~ |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
And it is raining here as I read this...a piece calling out at the perfect time (for how often do we really get rain here, huh?) I Loved every word! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
cool beans! love that!! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a beautiful feel to this poem..something about love in the rain..so romantic..enjoyed ~Victoria~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky--Some times a gentle rain brings nostalgic thoughts, doesn't it? You wrote the feeling beautifully! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Nothing better than finding another "rain" poem and this one truely is a beauty. I am so glad that this one came back up because with my limited time here I am sure I would have missed it. Very happy that I didn't. Wonderful write and wonderful topic...."LOVE AND RAIN" mix so well together. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
amazing analogy...when rain so often is equated with sorrow...when it is so right to equate it with moisture...renewal...life! enjoyed! |
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