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Open Poetry #15

Reserving Observations

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-08-16 01:57 PM

    Reserving Observations

         white tribes lingering
    on north’s horizon
         having sent
            cumulus scouts

         ahead

     to seek whether
         or not
       all were ready
            to accept
          heaven’s tears

      somewhere, it is
           time to weep

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-16 01:59 PM

very nice image to go with the verse... as usual..you have captured much with your words..and speak on more than one level..

very nicely done...always a pleasure to read and ponder....

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-08-20 04:13 AM

DecaFlame~
Oh ... Wow ~
I'm so glad I was exploring the back pages~
Such a lovely little gem~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-08-20 10:31 PM

This is just too good! Wow, I love the flow and the finale just grabs me...
Please, more.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-08-21 07:47 PM

Fantastic, both in metaphor and imagery. Very wonderful read!

Sincerely,
Regina

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