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Decaflame
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0 posted 2001-08-16 01:57 PM




    Reserving Observations

         white tribes lingering
    on north’s horizon
         having sent
            cumulus scouts

         ahead

     to seek whether
         or not
       all were ready
            to accept
          heaven’s tears

      somewhere, it is
           time to weep


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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-08-16 01:59 PM


very nice image to go with the verse... as usual..you have captured much with your words..and speak on more than one level..

very nicely done...always a pleasure to read and ponder....


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-08-20 04:13 AM


DecaFlame~
Oh ... Wow ~
I'm so glad I was exploring the back pages~
Such a lovely little gem~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-08-20 10:31 PM


This is just too good!  Wow, I love the flow and the finale just grabs me...
Please, more.

rwood
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Tennessee
4 posted 2001-08-21 07:47 PM


Fantastic, both in metaphor and imagery. Very wonderful read!

Sincerely,
Regina

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