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All the Lovers |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Sometimes late at night I think of all the lovers in each others arms some are never without a special someone never alone in their bed with just their dreams living life to the fullest that is the way it seems They are never alone a free spirit they roam No need to experience pain and nothing to lose or gain no tears on their pillow nor promises to endure overlooking someone true faithful as a nun blind to her beauty and her gift of love Sometimes late at night I wonder if the pillow of a nun is adorned with teardrops too? wrapped within her vows praying in the moonlight hue. Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sometimes late at night I wonder if a pillow of a nun is adorned with teardrops too? wrapped within her vowels praying in the moonlight hue. wonderful ending... to a wonderful poem... I truly like this one... a great deal |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
beautiful, Victoria, poignant I too like the ending lots, but I have one question...did you truly want 'vowels' (aeiou) or 'vows' (oaths to God) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you pat...glad you enjoyed.. thank you.. thank you Virginia haa...i meant vows haa..of course...hugs.. [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Hmmmm. . . Very interesting write, Victoria. Problem is, I can't quite sort out the conflicts. Such as: "They are never alone a free spirit they roam" Oh well, some readers just don't get it, right? \\ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i was speaking of free spirits...no strings attached and no questions asked..never lonely for a lover..thanks for reading though...and peeking in.. ~Victoria~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You know, I'm sure I remember being a free spirit..It's there in the back of the memory bank somewhere.. Nice write, sometimes it seems like thats the way to go, too. Sandra |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So nice to read one of your works again and this one was a treat indeed. Well written and it carries much thought behind it. Well done. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Sandra..yes it might be the way to go haa..thanks hon hugs Mark..thank you for peeking in..and welcome back to the board..hopefully you are here to stay..  ~Victoria~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
that is the way it seems... Yes, but things aren't always as they appear. Liked this a lot! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
all I have to say is "no woman should sleep alone"  " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you JLR..nice to hear from you tonight. Kathleen..you got that right ha..hugs Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am laughing at Kathleen as I am the original "free spirit", and I absolutely love it, no strings, no ties, and whoosh I am gone! I loved this Victoria. ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lucky you ha...glad you liked Mysteria.. ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
And then some are alone in their bed, even when another occupies it, some folk never dream. Nuns doubtless cry as in their beds they lie. Thought provoking. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sometimes late at night I think of all the lovers in each others arms I guess we sometimes think alike *s huggss there Miss ~V~..missing our connections lately ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Richard..thank you for peeking in today. Nice to hear from you.. Wynter..yes i miss you too..going to Vegas on Sunday..wish me luck hugss ~Victoria~ |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Wreathing emotion, and thought. Certainly enjoyable! Willie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Victoria I would be in shock if with the thoughts of love I didn't also experience pain...they seem to come as a package deal...James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - this is deep, moving and poigant - the last few lines hit hard!~ Melissa~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Victoria What a beautiful, touching piece of writing this is, I enjoyed it immensely. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Willie James..melissa and Sue, glad you all enjoyed...thanks for visiting ~Victoria~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - this is most beautiful. I also, would think of all the lovers... BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Bill..nice to hear from you ~Victoria~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Victoria, I have missed reading you in Ceaseless Blue, I need to stop by Passions more often. Loved the last stanza. Annie May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you annie...nice to hear from you..i havent been there cause i cant get thru..thought RJ closed it down..thanks again..hugs.. ~Victoria~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Stunning piece from you ~V~... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you lauren...nice of you to peek in ~Victoria~ |
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