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Open Poetry #15

I've been there

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-26 03:40 PM

I've been there
many times
To where love has no name
Where my heart can't hurt again
Where my love stands alone
without fears or hopes
But then I miss the raindrops
on this thirsty soil
But then I miss the sun
on these vast skies
And it's then that I return
forgiving
forgetting
wanting
hoping
to begin again.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 07-26-2001).]

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-07-26 04:05 PM

Round and round it goes...the choices are ours. Liked this a lot, walker.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-26 04:42 PM

yes... to begin again...

nicely done... summed up in poetic style the cycle I think we or most of us can relate to

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

3 posted 2001-07-26 05:10 PM

So true! seems to just go around and around again....just as long as we begin again...Thank you I needed this today
Cindi

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-07-31 08:52 PM

walker-
   There is much truth in these words.
   Nicely done.

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2001-08-01 10:27 AM

enjoy

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