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Open Poetry #15

summer's green

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-07-26 11:10 AM

summer’s green

summer’s green
plumps
the grape
to a lush
fullness of juices
awaiting

to satisfy

from childhood I
have nibbled at the top
of the green plump,
carefully peeling
the skin from
the body

before taking it
all in

so as thoughts of you
traipse across
my heart
I wonder

what you would do
if I wore

summer’s green for
you

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-26 11:11 AM

hmmm.. sounds like a bit of seductive thought here... nice work..

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-07-26 02:40 PM

this made me giggle aloud here in the quiet of my home

seductive indeed

reminds me of a question that went around in the 70's..."If I told you you had a beautiful body, would you hold it against me?"

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2001-07-27 03:03 PM

Very nice work here, Lady. Sensual for sure and done so well. Loved it!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Miranda
Junior Member

since 2001-07-26

Posts 32
OOOOOklahoma!

4 posted 2001-07-27 04:34 PM

I found this to be a fun playful piece to read, guess that is part of the allure... Thanks for sharing it.
Miranda

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-07-28 10:47 PM

Lady In White-
   I like it...LOTS!
   Fun...with a hint of seduction.
   Nicely done.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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