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Open Poetry #15

Giddy

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-07-26 09:35 AM

Giddy

‘tis a thread
wound
inside

which
an invisible hand
reaches within
to pull
and like a
top

I spin

and look
to his
love

again

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-26 09:37 AM

a..the eternal toy..the top. nice poem Lady... and I still to this day am fascinated with tops and gyros

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-07-26 03:20 PM

wonderful metaphor for what love and infatuation can do to one

giddy can feel pretty good, can't it!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2001-07-31 08:46 PM

Lady In White-
   Ah...so it is.
   I like

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-07-31 11:34 PM

Giddy is nice at times..a very well thought of simile...very gentle smile

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-07-31 11:40 PM

LadyInWhite~
Ya' spun a good one~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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