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Misty Cry
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Misty Cry |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Hoping out despair placing something else where a sorrow & a sadness once sullenly sulkingly sat. How to replace all that, their opposites may seem extreme staying with them though seems awfully mean Moods just up enough to bring an inward smile, not always necessary to go the extra mile, only to reach joy & stay a little while; As cool as depression gets how hard a bad memory is to forget though can all be easily mended when let, A story in the mind can bite so hard & slow that it seems the fight is lost with time as letting go becomes something somewhere someone else may know where then the battle & why lose the war with misty cry broken distraught looking to hide until recovered then another ride; Recording  |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
Misty cry is lovely ....I get the real feel of the ups and downs of moods and how someone somewhere can trigger the difference ......thanks for this one Craig |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done with imagery and flow to create the feel... I enjoyed! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I think this is a great poem, describes the ups and downs very well. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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