Open Poetry #15 |
Searching |
shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Searching Endlessly, fearlessly, searching For what I’m seldom shown. Endlessly, faithfully On the edge of a story often told. Fearlessly, searching all about For the answers I have always known. Searching, breathlessly For the truth I have seldom shown. Restlessly, listening with a glow For bits and pieces of a puzzle I solved long ago. Desperately, seeking to grow On and on, my heart needs to know. Words, wonders, ways I have looked at the hearts of all I know. Seasons upon seasons I have searched all, imploring reasons. Slumber of mind teases me so Just when I gain comfort and grow. Endlessly, fearlessly, searching On a journey I began Ions ago. Loving, leisurely giving What it takes that I know. Tease me, tenderly please me By reflecting on all I have been shown. My heart having questions without answers Only cold facts to use what I know. Grow, growing still On a endless Journey with little skill. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this very much |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Thank you SEA. A smile for you. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I can relate to this, Dan. Well written, and I especially like the last 2 lines -- your signature, right? -- which this poem defines. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Thank you Mark, yes,I have found that a person can be very intellgent but finding the wisdom to put that intellagence to work in there life comes very slowly. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
My favourite line of many good ones; quote: Well done There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. byron [This message has been edited by Jamie (edited 07-25-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done..and one I enjoyed |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
SEA, thank you for your comments, they are appreciated. Mark, Thank you for your comments, Agreed, my poem and my signiture mean one should never give up. No matter how slow the going gets the person must keep going. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Jamie I thank you for the nice comments. CaptHair, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem it was written many years ago but for me the message it convey's still hold true. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Truly enjoyable piece. Keep 'em coming Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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