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Castle in the Clouds
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Castle in the Clouds |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Castle built on clouds of love rising o'er the hidden walls princess gazes far above prays that he will heed her call. Destiny, she calls to you eyes aglow with unshed tears Come and show it to be true tell her she has naught to fear. Looking down, he signals her yes, she will be his someday one more season passing by then shall he arrive to stay. Patience, maid,I shall be there though the barricades are tall At this time I can't say where Look for me behind each wall. Hearts of past thus shall unite never truly out of sight. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written, enjoyed the read. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Flows...like fantasy. Enjoyed! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, hearts of past..and some would say they aren't real..as was is..very gentle smile |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Always barracades... What ever became of the wide-open roads and rolling hills? -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Fabulously woven, catalinamoon, really enjoyed this "Princely promise" |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, The ultimate fantasy. I'm right there with you. You write so beautifully. If only the words could be our ticket to paradise, you would already be there..... Love, Elise |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
catalinamoon- Wonderfully woven piece..enjoyed reading this.  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well considering I live in "fantasy land" 14/7 you have to know I adored this one! ~To see real beauty you must look with your heart~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ The cadence in this piece is lovely~ A pleasurable read-aloud piece~ 'Destiny, she calls to you eyes aglow with unshed tears Come and show it to be true tell her she has naught to fear.' Enchanting~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
never truly out of sight...... yes, it's only out of sight if we let ourselves believe that it is...... think of all that we miss by talking ourselves out of believing! Thank you for this one today, sis!!!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful fairytale ... BTTT |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Castle built on clouds of love rising o'er the hidden walls princess gazes far above prays that he will heed her call. Destiny, she calls to you eyes aglow with unshed tears Come and show it to be true tell her she has naught to fear. ====================== WOw.....Sandra.... What a lovely dream on the clouds..... and you have penned it with such beautiful flow and tone.......Lovely Thank you ********************************* |
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