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RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

0 posted 2001-07-12 12:01 PM

The mellow merge of our embrace
entwines as silk cocoon in grace,
two warm and willing in one space
our burrowed passion melts

As microsom we enlace
the outer world by Love displaced,
our breasts hearthed heat lust's fireplace
and winter casts all else

We Lovers lie one sphere serene,
we meld and mold twins epicene
and all the globe remains unseen,
so huddled we're sublime

Our fruit fulfills sweet nectarine,
as nested doves we coo and preen,
clutched pair where none dare intervene
Lover's rhythmic rhyme

Unheard our eyes speak collusion,
unseen our lips seek seclusion,
unknown such bliss peaks conclusion,
felicity captured

Apart seems a dreamed illusion,
adhered even air's intrusion,
at last we gasp in rushed fusion,
molded into rapture

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-07-12 12:35 PM

a lovely treatment of two people in love and letting the rest of the world go by...very nice, very romantic

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-07-12 01:53 AM

"We Lovers lie one sphere serene,
we meld and mold twins epicene
and all the globe remains unseen,
so huddled we're sublime"

wow....

love this

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

3 posted 2001-07-12 02:06 AM

Two as one... beautifully expressed RSW I truly enjoyed the read...

*~coco~*

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-07-12 02:22 AM

Ah...you old smoothe you haven't lost that touch, this is very sensual and romantic Richard, nicely done.

If you have a choice to sit down or dance, dance!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-07-12 08:35 AM

very smooth... nice use of language and form to convey... very nice read... I enjoyed!!!

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-07-13 07:10 AM

Okay..I'm *Sighing* Can you see me? Geesh..I do love this! I certainly wish I could do this as well as you!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-07-13 07:24 AM

this is very well written...
clever and impressive in rhyme scheme, vocabulary and imagery.
Youve painted quite a romantic, passionate scene with your words.
Well done poet sir

jm

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2001-07-13 08:02 AM

Written with the ink of passion..enjoyed RS

~Victoria~

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