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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Stately line, blue grey wall sliding across and under darker grey above brings rain. Big drops that plop and pop in strobe light lightning Gailed trees bend as now brown grass undulatingly runs across field then it ends... slowly fading... and I think of how like passions passing reign |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
if I were to reply to this, it would have to be along the rhymes of clouds loom heat zooms thunder cries rain tries sizzles die |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
You painted a beautiful picture for me with this one! Loved it! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
well if this poem holds true, then I must be in the calm of the storm....cause passion sure is quiet these days  enjoyed this  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Enjoyed and Decaflame nailed it dead on! lol, so ditto her comment! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A clever and unique description: as now brown grass undulatingly runs across field Enjoyed the pictorial. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
liked it all, the unique ending and especially the same section Mark held up. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
loving this one.... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Visually stimulating! Uh oh, Makes one want to chase the storm! Fantastic.Sincerely, Rwood |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done Sir. . . here comes the storm!! -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very well written, Capt, Stormy weather, I like it when it's wetter. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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