Open Poetry #15 |
One Kiss From You.................... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
can I have your lips softly upon skin touching gently wending within ~*~ to my soul passion travel leave me undone a slow unravel ~*~ a barely there glide of kiss subdued hint of mouthly bliss ~*~ pouty promises I’ll make come true if I can have one kiss from you ~SEA~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Who does not want to kiss the sea? Enjoyed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sure..anytime! (laughing) Very nicely done SEA... Enjoyed a great deal! Upon my lips a taste of sea when tongue does wet them now, and then the sun to softly warm the heart of you as only it knows how. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Isn't your spouse just the luckiest man alive?.... you're so charming when you pen little gems like these.... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Seymour Ron, that is great, thanks Deca~ I read this to him last night....I got my kiss thank you ~SEA |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sea. Your heart it burns with passion true, so all you wish should come to you. Make your wish and don't despair, I'm sure by two they'll all be there. Nice read Sea. Rick |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Susan ~ This has a wonderful flow to it, and of course, it's exuberantly passionate Melissa~ |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
mmmmmmmmmmmm oh how I love this *big big smile* |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I love the flow of this, very easy to read....much meaning to it too! well done! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Oh my Sea....I forgot about your naughty side. LOL. Great read. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Lovely There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rick~ that was wonderful, thank you Melissa~ thank you Jellybeans~ Big, big smiles right back to ya thank you Cindi~ thank you very much Marilyn~ LOL...it's always there...just under my skin LOL...thank you ~SEA |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Jamie |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Sometimes the anticipation can be unbearable...very nicely done! |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Soft, gentle kisses -----hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm the kind that are hard to forget. Very nice. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, Your husband must adore these wonderfully romantic poems of yours. Truly enjoyed this. (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah Sea, that is what makes you so special! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Just beautiful! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Inspired by sensuous thought and written as the vision unfolded Lovely Liz. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love as the more sultry, seductive side of you comes out SEA. . . it makes for great poetry. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mmm, delicious little poem, sure does make kissing sound wonderful. May have to take it up again.. Sandra |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
One word for you....wow. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ooooooooooooops, almost missed this one. Pucker up, gal Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth [URL=http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/Interloper.htm] [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-27-2001).] |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
hehe, sweet I don't doubt you get said kisses often! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
sea oh i really like this, you express the magic of a kiss so well |
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