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Open Poetry #15

Love Bites

Sabriel.s.h.lover
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 73
b.f.e. aka- Hickville

0 posted 2001-07-11 11:45 PM

this is the first I've written in a LONG time, i've been on a sorta vacation.Neways, here it is.

I've been biten,
by the bug called love.
It stung me on neck,
just when he kissed me.
It left a wound,
that will never heal.
I feel slighty degraded,
maybe even dirty.
Completely against,
my every moral.
He came and stole my heart,
then hung me out to dry.
He left me alone,
cold, and loveless.
Now the bug is back again,
maybe this time to......ease my pain?

So many books, so little time
stupidity shoudl be painful

[This message has been edited by Sabriel.s.h.lover (edited 07-11-2001).]

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-07-12 01:00 AM

ooh, I hope so, Sabriel! I hope he doesn't bug you in any other way.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

2 posted 2001-07-12 01:06 AM

Quite an expressive write.......
I enjoyed it.......alot.

Thank you
*************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Ann
Member

since 2000-07-07

Posts 64
Australia

3 posted 2001-07-12 06:51 AM

hey there....this was a good poem and i enjoyed reading it alot. all the best,

~ANN~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-07-12 07:36 AM

as long as you enjoyed it and it was love, don't feel bad! This is a very original poem!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-07-12 08:23 AM

got to watch them bugs...

I enjoyed the poem, nicely done

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-07-12 10:19 AM

Cute, the title pulled me in, and the poem was creative.
Sandra

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