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insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

0 posted 2001-07-24 05:19 PM

Your voice so sweet like honey
Skin as soft as a bunny
Eyes so blue like ocean dew
And a smile that only suits you

Your lips they taste delicious
And our time we have so precious
If we only have moments together
It’s timeless in this place of forever

If I should ever lose your kisses
And wanting to go is your wishes
I must allow our love to move on
But the truth is…our loves never gone

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-24 05:26 PM

very soft and sweet... nice poem

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

2 posted 2001-07-24 05:27 PM

This beautifully written..really enjoyed reading it!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-07-24 05:31 PM

hey.....*smooch*

this is sweet

I enjoyed this

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2001-07-24 07:14 PM

Very sweet write, indeed, insect...I enjoyed it!

sp

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

5 posted 2001-07-25 07:59 PM

Cpat Hair
Thank you
Nice of you to read

cpalmer
Thank you for enjoying the read

Lois
That’s a super kiss…thanks!
*smooch* back and more…but hey someone
might see us Lois!…let’s jump into this broom
closet before anyone spots us…(shuffle!, shuffle!)
(Click!)…. hey we got locked in…how are we going
to explain this!…you got a credit card…maybe we
can break out but we better wait till everyone goes
home so they don’t find out!…in the mean time
come here!…*SMOOOOCHY*……….

snowpants
Nice to see you here
For you
________________________
Flakes of snow floating free
Provide the fun in a sliding white sea
Everyone racing to stay in the lead
Hurling down in an excitement of speed
It’s a romance of fun in a choreograph dance
In the dance of laughter gliding on snow pants

Savanna
New Member

since 2001-07-31

Posts 6

6 posted 2001-07-31 02:29 PM

This sent shivers up my spine!
It's frightening to know that one day it could all be over.
Enjoy the time you have with one another, because you never know. What's meant to be will be.
Great Poem!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-07-31 03:11 PM

Insect~
Nice to see you in the blue pages~
A delight you are for sure~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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blondeon
Junior Member

since 2001-07-31

Posts 13

8 posted 2001-08-02 05:25 PM

GREAT POEM SO WELL WRITTEN!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-08-02 06:22 PM

Yes, how true, the love is never gone. Nice work.
Sandra

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