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counting cotton threads
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
counting cotton threads she lifts the sheets and slides in remembering when the cold side was warmed by a willing wanting man and wonders if when who why... the old music plays golden tones times gone by remembering the feel remembering the why faded on dresser's shelf photographs him on one side, then, herself remembering who decades gone, still only a breath away remembering when somehow, someway she senses without trepidation that there will one day be an if if so she'll greet the morrow with a smile when she lifts the sheets and slides in |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"the old music plays golden tones times gone by remembering the feel" this is so soft.....  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sounds like at least a 300 count to me.... too soft to be anything less... very nicely done |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
well written, I wonder if it would be the same or would it be better. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
sliding so slowly tempting time tells totally usual union Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nicely written and expressed, enjoyed your poem. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Lovely expression~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Visual, sensual, contemplative... a very well guided unfolding of impressions. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady In White- I like this one very much.. Nicely done.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I saw this title the other day and knew I had to read it, but got called away, am glad I found it today....great write...I too wait *nods her head* great write |
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