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A New Day
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A New Day |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az 
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A New Day A heart that's lost In depth of despair A heart so lost It's beyond repair Lost in the shadows Of darkest night Lost in sorrow And hate and fright Trying to emerge From the deepest hole Hoping and searching To find its soul A glimmer of light Slowly appears Is it able to rise Chase away the tears? The darkness so heavy The light so soft Can it save the heart That's gone aloft? Light shines brighter Dark drifts away Hope is emerging For a brand new day Cpalmer July 10, 2001 God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
What a great poem, you really touched home with this one. I know the feelings you talk about all too well. lyl |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Thank you Kirksters....The nice thing is that there is always the hope of a new day...lyll Cindi |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cindi~ I enjoyed the movement from darkness to the dawning of the new ~ Very nicely done !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge, Thank you, your opinion means alot to me... Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Light shines brighter Dark drifts away Hope is emerging For a brand new day" I like this so much!  |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Sea, Thanks so much for reading...I love when the sun comes up and there is promise for a new and better day....hugs Cindi |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah yes! Hope is emerging For a brand new day |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I think as long as the hope is there, we can get through the darkest hours. Nicely done. Sandra |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice message and the poem..is perfect |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vas, Thank you...The hope is what makes it possible for me... Cindi Sandra Thank you so much...I agree as long as there is hope we can get through the darkest hours...Cindi Cpat Thanks so much for reading...Im glad you liked it...Thanks for the compliment! hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
cindi- This is truly one of your best, my dear..  I love the positive ending... love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vicky, Thank you for the compliment...I am trying to spread my wings a little in writing...glad you liked it! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wow cindi very cool |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Cliche' yes but so true, "alls well that ends well", and I loved this poem and your positive ending Cindy, nice work. ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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FireDancer123 Junior Member
since 2001-06-14
Posts 43Virginia |
Beautiful beautiful!!! It flowed like honey, and made for a great read. I think I'll go back and do it again now.. thanks for all the comments on my work too :^) :::Barefeet and Greengrass::: "If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - A.Duritz |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very nice write, Cindi. There is always hope, no matter how dark it seems. Remember that and you will be just fine. All writing comes |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Given what I am going through right now regarding matters of the heart, this poem really touches me. The lines "lost in sorrow...and hate and fright" perfectly describe the different feelings I am having.. sometimes all at once Your positive ending reminds me that although everything may seem "dark" now, I know that eventually things will get lighter. It's that belief that keeps me smiling. Thanks for putting it into words so well. - Jeff |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I want to appologize to all of you for not responding sooner, I have been on vacation. Wayoutwalt Thanks so much for reading I am glad you liked it! Mysteria It's always nice to know that the days dont have to be so dark...I like the cliche'...by the way, I just got back from Canada...beautiful country! Firedancer I am so glad you liked it! I love to hear that you read it again! thanks!! I do enjoy your work Lone wolf Thank you for reading and for the reminder...it's almost hard to remember the bright side of things dont you think? Im glad we can reflect on that though Rascalx Im sorry that life is so dark right now and I hope it gets better...Im glad that my words can make at least a little bit of comfort for you? Take care Thanks to all of you...hugs...Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vandana Glad you liked it! Hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
Cindi, I really love this one. It merges from sad and dark to shine light on the hope that something better lies just around the corner! Great job! luv ya Tanya Dance like nobody is watching |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Tanya, Thanks for the input...your oppinion means alot to me...Thanks Love ya Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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