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Too Grand |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~Too Grand~ too grand the rivers of my soul too grand the tears that pay the toll too grand the oceans to be sailed too grand the hurt lest love prevailed too grand the fragrance of the rose too grand the heat from candle glows too grand the price to play the game two grand, the number by my name  ~vlraynes Sorry everybody...I just couldn't resist!! LOL "...until you have read the verse on his |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
CONGRATULATIONS Vicky!!!  this is too cute  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well two grand indeed! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 Vicky~You sparkleYou shine Writing verse So sublime~ A nifty two-grander You definitely are Reaching out to others Shining poetic star~ Congratulations on that TOO grand ! You are a DELIGHT ! Quality AND Quantity in one neat package~ LOVE YOU~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Isn't it so much FUN to take a special number and RUN with it! Actually, this was too, too special! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I really enjoyed this. It's so light-hearted. Betty Lou Hebert |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Touched my heart with the poem. then you let the cat out of the bag and 2000 Vicky that's quiet a feat. Congradulations*** Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
CONGRATULATIONS VICKY! This is a great way to celebrate it! Hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You clever lil' cutie you!  Congratulations, Vicky! You are "two" grand, indeed [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-24-2001).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Too grand to keep this to yourself. Thanks for sharing another good one with us! Hugs, Deb |
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Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
Congrats Vicky! You're awesome...I love this one!!! mua Tanya |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Congratulations, Vicky! Clever, cute poem! |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
yes ........... you r tooooooooooo Grand good poem |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky--congratulation on being so rich...with poetry and friendship. So glad to know you in both! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
too grand the oceans to be sailed too grand the hurt lest love prevailed too grand the fragrance of the rose too grand the heat from candle glows ============================== Well Im glad you couldnt resist... teasing ending or not... you have some WONDERFUL verses and cadence in this.. clever, fun, writing Vicky, Congrats on your 2000th post.. only you could give love that satisfies the soul... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Very, very cool...and grand way to do this. Smiling with you! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A grand way to celebrate your 2000th post! Congratulations Vicky! Maree "little miss understood |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
I like this! Very clever  CongratsStrive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
too funny are you...!  congrats on two grand! hug, g "sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.." -demi moore |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
congratulations from me 2 There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Congrats for me too! This was simply "grande"! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
WOW!!! I just love you guys!!! SEA- Thanks so much..glad you found it cute. Cpat- Thanks for reading.. Marge- YOU, sister of my heart, know just how to make my day!! Once again, you've cause my smile to get bigger than my face.. I LOVE YOU SOOOOOO MUCH!!  Decaflame- Yes...I have to admit that this one was kinda fun..LOL. Thanks so much, sweet friend.. Trillium- Thanks so much...glad you enjoyed. shadow974- So happy this touched you...couldn't resist the little play on words though..LOL. Thanks much! cindi- Well, thank you dear.. Glad you like this little ditty. Just havin' a little pun...i mean...fun! LOL love you lots. Melissa- You're TOO sweet to me.. Thanks so much, my friend.. Deb- Thank you, sweet friend.. Glad you enjoyed this one.. Tanya- Thanks sweets! So glad you like it! Love ya lots. Denise- Glad you enjoyed! Thanks so much.. Qumar Fatthi- Thanks so much...glad you enjoyed it. Martie- You really know how to make me smile.. So happy to have YOU as a friend as well. Thank you, sweet lady. Janet Marie- You're so good to me! Thanks so much for looking beyond my little play on words...glad you enjoyed. Thanks for 'WONDERFUL'. Love ya, sweet friend.. JLR- Thanks much! Glad you enjoyed!! Maree- Thank you so much! ThUnDeRkYsS- So happy you enjoyed! Thanks so much for reading.. dg- Funny? Me??? What would make you say that? LOL Glad you were able to drop in for the party! Love ya bunches!! Jamie- And a big thank you to you too! hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon- You snuck in there while I was thanking the others...you sly one you..LOL. Thanks so much, sweet friend.. Glad you enjoyed this.. love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Congrats on reaching 2000 posts. Now hurry up and catch up so I can post normally again. LOL This was a wonderful and witty way to celebrate your 2000th. |
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