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Open Poetry #15
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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
0 posted 2001-07-24 09:37 AM


morning
stretches
stiletto silhouettes
across the patio
a sundial
announcing day’s arrival
silently ticking away
the minutes’
passings
naught shall
stay their course

© July 24, 2001
© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-07-24 09:46 AM

VAS,
True there is no stoping time. Enjoyed
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2001-07-24 09:49 AM

very true... and very nicely done
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-07-25 02:56 PM

WOW!  This is absolutely one of your best, Virginia.  No room for levity in this response.  Well done, indeed!
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