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Forever and a Day
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Forever and a Day |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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“Will you marry me?” He asked the question, holding out his heart, within his hand... She felt the answer stir inside her soul... His face, her well-loved fantasy, their destiny pre-planned... He was her Prince, in dreams so long ago... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ She said: “I’ve waited for you” All these years I’ve known, inside my heart, that you were real... Our paths would cross, and someday we would meet... I knew that if I held onto my dream, someday I’d feel this joy, to lay my heart here at your feet... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “Please take my hand” He beckoned her to venture near, and place her hand in his... And soon she found her home in his embrace... A look into his gentle eyes, became their love’s first kiss... and tears of joy slipped down her weary face... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “My answer is ...yes” She’d always known someday he’d come, and soul to soul would mate... And now she saw the smile within his eyes... The question asked---the answer given, their love, an act of fate... Two hearts as one, on angel’s wings to rise... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The question has been answered, but the story has just begun... And who can guess what new games Fate will play? The two will join together, and their hearts will be as one... Eternal love... Forever, and a day... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..we hope forever and a day.... regardless of the tricks fate plays. Nicely done... I enjoyed |
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mpt Junior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 32australia |
very good read, if only we all could have our own forever and a day Though dreams can be deceiving |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Yes, yes, yes --- Camelot relived. Nicely done. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful thoughts Sunnyone. I believe that too many of us that reach out for forever find ourselves embracing never or whenever...hard to find two hearts with common goals...James |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sunnyone- This is absolutely beautiful!  Nobody writes of love quite like you, my friend. Just lovely. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yes....forever and a day...oh beautiful and soooo romantic....love it. Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful write and I especially liked the format of this one. You seem to have kept in practice since I have been gone and that is a good thing. I truely enjoyed reading this one sis. Nice to find one of yours today. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, I'm loving this, you know. Such a hopeful future you pass on to us. And beautifully written. Sandra |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So romantic, I love this one. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Lovely poem, and so romantic! Deb |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Wonderful poem. My soulmate and I have based our entire time together (31 yrs) on these two lines: ...Eternal love... Forever, and a day... I'll be sure she reads this one. Thanks. Melton |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ hello, my friends ~~~ I want to thank each and every one of you for reading and commenting on this poem, as it is special to me, and was good to share with my family here. I appreciate all of your wonderful words here, and want you to know that it meant a lot to me... ~~~ thank you so much ~~~ Sunny The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautiful poem Sunny, I like the last stanza best, The questions hav been answered, but the stories just begun... And who will guess what new games fate will play? The two will join together,And their hearts shall be as one... Eternal love... Forever and a day... This is so powerful so positive but let us what new games fate will play. Many times romance is not reverenced by both husband and wife, and the dreams and promices never come true. It is so sad. I have a happy story book romance with my wife, But it is so sad what is going on in our world. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello shadow974... Love is always unpredictable and sometimes very suprising in it's outcome. I do believe in soul mates, as I was blessed in this life with my own. But I also know that there are many lost souls looking and not seeing when they think that they have found the right one. Yes, there is misery, and lonliness, and betrayal on every level. But we should rejoice in the stories of those who have shown us that love is really out there. For, as your own story, it gives us hope, and the courage to try...just one more time! Thank you so much..as this was a very special poem to me, and my soul mate. The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"Forever and a day" ... Yes ... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Lovely sentiments. Too bad over 1/2 of all "forever and a days" can actually be measured in time. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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