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In Heaven's Light...
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In Heaven's Light... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Take my hand and be my love, whil'st we dance, 'mid stars above, 'mid sapphired jewels of Southern Crown, sequined gems of heaven's gown. Apollo's lute plays sweet refrain, as two as one, we waltz again, swaying softly, 'cross welkin's floor, to sounds of Eros, night's amour. O' Dulcinea, come to me, to dance entwined, eternally, encaptured in night's sensual dance, in Luna's glow to find romance. Passion's coursing through the night, Come be my love, in heaven's light. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh,Mike~ No one ... but no one, writes the night as romantically lovely as you do. Darn this is just gorgeous ! A contender for top-shelf ! I just love the sound of it read aloud. *sighhhhhhhhhhhhh* Beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mike- This is just so lovely...got me swooning here..  Such a romantic you are.. Absolutely beautiful.. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*....I could dance all night through upon this romantic wave of words.....*sigh* soooo beautiful done. Charisma |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOOHHHHHHHH would that I could waltz with you....how very lovely |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ditto all of the above, and save me a dance! Just stated, wow! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
~*~huge sighs~*~ Words that simply melt the heart... "Beautiful" ~ beyond my words to convey! Smiles to you, ~*~Dawn~*~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
OMG, I'm melting. This is absolutely beautiful! Maree "little miss understood |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Mike...James |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Exquisitely romantic! Sigh!!!!!!!!!! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Mike Your usual perfection Exquisite, beautiful, Magical verse Liz |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh....this read like a slow romantic dance....thank you...I needed that!!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, I agree with all the above. Well done. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You must be in the country, your Honor, in order to see the constellations so clearly... and without the city's racket to sing the song so beautifully... well done, Sir... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Mike, What a true beauty this is, "Oh" how you have made such music with your poetry, you are truly gifted, enjoyed so very much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mike this is just a wonderful dance to watch, I love to dance, especially in such a romantic atmosphere. Beautiful, sir! Sandra |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very well done! Excellent read and flow... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Mike--seems I am last in line for a dance. The romance of this poem is ancient and new and very becoming. Loved it! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
awesome it puts my work to shame o yuh |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oh my, oh my, I think I'll change my name do you think it would be too, too obvious if I asked all to call me Dulcinea from this moment forth?  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Mike~  Oh my! I'm swooning with your words, this is just so beautiful, tender, clever and whimsical. There are just no other words to describe how gorgeous this poem really is, it's a hallmark card waiting to happen I adore this, into my library this goes~Melissa~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Dreamy....... your poem swept me away into a romantic fantasy. A lovely dance with the one that I love. -Bob |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I'm glad I got to attend this romantic dance! Wonderful job! Betty Lou Hebert |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Okay...Like you are the Sinatra..the Elvis..the Ricky Martin...(whoever) of the stars!!! Cause I'm swooned here...I feel it! Wow! Impressive to say the least Sincerely, Regina |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely breathtaking, Mike! Soooo beautiful! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank you all so much for your extremely kind and gracious replies. I invite you to gaze upon the stars tonight, as there is no beauty that compares to the heaven's on a summer eve. I suspect you will hear the symphony of the night and might even feel the urge to dance. Again, thank you all. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ahhhh, who could resist such a lovely invitation to dance beneath the stars ? I was just checking out the Nordic Observatory Telescope site - some mighty pretty things out there to write about ! Thank you again for sharing this lovely piece of writing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mike~ an enchanted weave from the golden touch of a poet...this is so delicate and tender....just beautiful! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nicely done! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Take my hand and be my love, whil'st we dance, 'mid stars above, 'mid sapphired jewels of Southern Crown, sequined gems of heaven's gown. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Very romantic lovely read. Deb |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, this is so lovely, so lovely, I'm so glad I sat down to read for a bit. Thank you this one, Mike. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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