Open Poetry #15 |
Swept Away By Love |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
You my love are my breath of fresh air the colors of my rainbow my diamond in the rough and the one who touches my soul so delicately and so exquisitely Your love is like a mirage in the desert such a welcoming sight to this weary traveller You are the jewel in my crown the bird in my paradise the lily in my valley the star in my constellation the burning ember in my fire and the one my heart desires How our bodies burn with such passion and desire only to be cooled by love's tranquil waters How easily we immerse ourselves into love's pool and become totally swept away by its sensual sea There is no turbulence here only the calming waters that soothe the mind and free the soul How easily and willingly we lose ourselves in our own piece of paradise in our own precious moment in time and in one another Suetang |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
enjoyed your poem, nicely written. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Oh .. so nicely written. Beautiful thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Better than Lindt chocolate. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Suetang- This is just beautiful.. Very nicely done.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well now..this is certainly nice.. I enjoyed!! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I'm swept away by beautiful words! You tug on the heartstrings Sue! I'm smiling Sincerely, Regina |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
So romantic this was beautifuly written to put so much passion into love and even life is something I must work on. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your lovely words. I enjoyed writing this one and I'm so glad you all liked it. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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