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Open Poetry #15

Sifting

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

0 posted 2001-07-23 11:25 PM

Sifting memories,
delusions strong

awakened symbols

changing songs

pattern follow

hidden rays

streaming thoughts

altered ways;



While the power shifts

tact's manoeuvre gentle,

concentrate activity mental;



Learn with delicate ease,

magic riding upon the breeze,

& with each natural breath intake,

separate the real from the fake;

Place the truth

right up front

give solid answers

quick & blunt;



Please time decisions through each quest,

with foundation sprung from stringent test;

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2001-07-23 11:32 PM

Wonderfully written and thoroughly enjoyed.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2001-07-25 08:18 PM

I like this, I really do.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-07-26 08:45 AM

Yep..nicely done..like the flow and sounds of this.. they surround the subject itself it seems..

I enjoyed

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-07-27 11:58 AM

Very well done. The finale not as powerful as the rest, but a good piece indeed

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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