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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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a miracle-- I want to make the heavens swirl... I want to make it all come true-- sunbeams carved into my shoes future hope in past unfurled, as I kick the wood from me-- hearing but the wings of girl, such thunder hungers after me... feather keep me from the cold Angels please enrapture me-- sing sweet lullabies of sleep... |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Angle is here and singing sweet .....lovely girl  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is soft, lovely, what a treasure. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity - most telling that you write, and with the softness of an angel. BC |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... as usual.. I enjoyed a great deal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, I have waved my wand. Let it be so. Enjoyed |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a flight of fancy...truly delightful! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hearing but the wings of girl, such thunder hungers after me... How I pray for wing's enfold... feather keep me from the cold Angels please enrapture me-- sing sweet lullabies of sleep =================== baby...if I had a muse...Id write ya a lullaby... hugs...sleep me twin. Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Angels please enrapture me-- sing sweet lullabies of sleep... A lullabye to my ears Serenity. Sleep comes so few times these days, but with poetry like this.......the dreams will be sweet. Hugs. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
How I pray for wing's enfold... feather keep me from the cold Angels please enrapture me-- sing sweet lullabies of sleep... You know dreams have a way of coming true. I pray this one does. Words straight from the heart, enjoyed this alot. "Here I am in prison,here I am with a ball and chain There is whiskey in the jar-o" Traditional irish song. [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 07-11-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
A lullabye of extreme talent..Hope it makes magic for us all. Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Want to quickly thank everybody, (it's storming here and I jump three feet every time lightning flashes) but as always I do so appreciate you all reading and your comments---hope to catch up with you all later! THANKS!!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
we had those storms last night so I know how you feel.. a soft write serenity...I enjoyed. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I would sing a song Sweet lullaby If I only could I would but try But to hear me strain Well, I think you'd cry I pray for you that peace might come To find sweet dreams In lullaby "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
serenity This was absolutely stunning. Take care..Sue Suetang |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, stunning the way this flows..so very nice..gentle smile, a very happy sound to it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSerenity~ May you be feathered in gentle slumber~ This felt .... ummmm, all cuddly and quilty. Now ... turn OFF that computer in an electrical storm !  See ya' later~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity- oh boy, do i know this feeling...lol. wishing you a wonderful night's sleep, my friend..  i love this... hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Lula by and goodnight serenity, Sleep tight. I'm not an angel but I liked your poem. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
ExQuIsItE (there's nothing else that comes to my mind rite now in this reply other than this gibberish that I'm putting down as I try to find the rite words that could convey 2u just how delightful a read your poem was4me) HugsNsmiles2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I want to dance a miracle-- ============== Will you put me on your dance card? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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