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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-07-23 09:44 PM



Creation Senryu

Imagination
realms of heaven awaken
with poetry's pen

By Melissa P. Monette

© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-07-23 09:59 PM



perfection!

vlraynes
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2 posted 2001-07-23 10:05 PM



Melissa-
   Ah yes...I like this LOTS!  
   Very nicely done..

   hugs,
   ~vicky


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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



thecraig
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3 posted 2001-07-23 11:43 PM


The word is strong, Imagination originates. Nice Haiku & picture.
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4 posted 2001-07-24 02:12 AM


Melissa~
Very nicely done, poetess.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-07-24 06:56 AM


This is great.
...poetry's pen...
exactly a poet's job.

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6 posted 2001-07-25 12:26 PM


beautiful image
created in poet's mind
converted to words

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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7 posted 2001-07-25 02:02 PM


Melissa
What can I say....wonderful!

Cindi

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Honeybee
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8 posted 2001-07-25 02:11 PM



Thank you for your great replies  

This is how I feel when I read the many poems by all of you
~So I'll dedicate this senryu to ALL the poets at Passions~

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9 posted 2002-03-14 11:09 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always inspire us all and create such beauty for all our hearts to cherish forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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