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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-07-19 04:50 PM


Fairy-tale

Inside glimmer of luna’s gleam
she spreads her fragile wings
a gentle breeze lift up her flight
graceful like a dream

Wand of magic inside her hand
she flies with fairy’s elegance
twirls within abounded joy
freely upon a silver beam
this trinket of wonderland

How she lighted up this night
fairy’s magical moments
fireflies enlighten her path
her fragile figure encircled
by these twinkle kisses of light

She floats upon sorcery sounds
guide by  hush of twilight
enchanting silver voices
murmuring lullabies
while silence gently surrounds

Inside glimmer of luna’s gleam
she spreads her fragile wings
fluttering freely upon a breeze
pouring lot grains of sleepy sand
sorcereress of sweet dreams

Charisma

~TMP*~
19/07/01

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 07-21-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-07-19 04:54 PM


Very nicely flows across the page and mind.. I enjoyed!!

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2 posted 2001-07-19 05:30 PM




Lovely and sweet fairy tale like piece....

Thank you
*********************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

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Sweet and full of magic.
Sandra

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Charisma~
Sweetie, this is stunning !

'She floats upon sorcery sound
guide by hush of twilight'


Amazingly uplifting.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-07-21 04:49 AM



Cpat Hair:thank you for your kind comment, glad you enjoyed.

MyEnchanted_Melody: thank you for reading and your kind reply

catalinamoon:thanks for the sweet  

Marge Tindal:I am very glad that you liked it my friend  

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6 posted 2001-07-23 01:18 PM



Charisma-
   I like this one alot!!  
   Lovely thoughts and images you've penned.
   Very nicely done..

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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7 posted 2001-07-23 07:12 PM


flowing wonderfully in rhythm and rhyme my friend. . .

well done. . .  

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8 posted 2001-07-24 07:14 AM





~vicky: Thank you Vicky, I'm glad that you like this one.

Sven:thank you my friend, for your lovely compliment  

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9 posted 2001-07-25 05:41 PM


Lovely ..nicely done Charisma..enjoyed hugss...

             ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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10 posted 2001-07-25 06:20 PM


lovely piece filled with twinkle kisses of light and loftiness


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11 posted 2002-03-14 11:03 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeously spellbinding, sweet friend, may you forever have the sweetest dreams and may stardust forever blanket you in your sleep in joy and bring your fairy-tales to life! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is delightful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sahring!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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