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Fairy-tale |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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Fairy-tale Inside glimmer of luna’s gleam she spreads her fragile wings a gentle breeze lift up her flight graceful like a dream Wand of magic inside her hand she flies with fairy’s elegance twirls within abounded joy freely upon a silver beam this trinket of wonderland How she lighted up this night fairy’s magical moments fireflies enlighten her path her fragile figure encircled by these twinkle kisses of light She floats upon sorcery sounds guide by hush of twilight enchanting silver voices murmuring lullabies while silence gently surrounds Inside glimmer of luna’s gleam she spreads her fragile wings fluttering freely upon a breeze pouring lot grains of sleepy sand sorcereress of sweet dreams Charisma ~TMP*~ 19/07/01 [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 07-21-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nicely flows across the page and mind.. I enjoyed!! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Lovely and sweet fairy tale like piece....  Thank you ********************* It's only me.......only me |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sweet and full of magic. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Sweetie, this is stunning ! 'She floats upon sorcery sound guide by hush of twilight' Amazingly uplifting. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Cpat Hair:thank you for your kind comment, glad you enjoyed. MyEnchanted_Melody: thank you for reading and your kind reply catalinamoon:thanks for the sweet Marge Tindal:I am very glad that you liked it my friend |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Charisma- I like this one alot!! Lovely thoughts and images you've penned. Very nicely done.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
flowing wonderfully in rhythm and rhyme my friend. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~vicky: Thank you Vicky, I'm glad that you like this one. Sven:thank you my friend, for your lovely compliment |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely ..nicely done Charisma..enjoyed hugss... ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely piece filled with twinkle kisses of light and loftiness |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeously spellbinding, sweet friend, may you forever have the sweetest dreams and may stardust forever blanket you in your sleep in joy and bring your fairy-tales to life! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is delightful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sahring!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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