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Sparkling Stride |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 in words not so quickly uttered, atop clouds not regularly viewed, you scooped me up with an airy vibe... in sensations beneath wisdom’s caress, beyond azure emotions twisted around me, I am mesmerized by the September breezes in your gaze... rising with the solar beams of infinity, running from yesterday’s searing glare, the depths of me cease to seek solitude on misty islands... dancing on the boundaries of enduring promises, slashing the remnants of seclusion’s grip, the walk along this preview of tomorrow removes the ceiling on possibilities... sprinkled with powdered reality, delighted by the animation of sincerity, my restraint is rendered ineffective by the sapphire vision of you in the haze... -kh  it was love that first drew me, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's been a while since I've been treated to one of your pieces....so I am sitting here, smiling, at this little treasure... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Snowpants- This is trully beautifully expressed! Thanks again. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
in sensations beneath wisdom’s caress, beyond azure emotions twisted around me, I am mesmerized by the September breezes in your gaze... rising with the solar beams of infinity, ======================== delighted by the animation of sincerity, my restraint is rendered ineffective by the sapphire vision of you in the haze... ========================== I love the use of color in this ... like a rainbow of braided images and emotions wonderful ethereal and elemental phrases and vocab this is beautiful!! well done poetess K jm only you could give love that satisfies the soul... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ Absolutely stunning~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Visually stunning words. Very deep and beautiful, I can see many things reading this, you write very well. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I'm so glad that I read this beautiful work! Definitely one to save to read over & over. *smiles* ~Tier |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Sunshine: well, I am glad I could give you a treat...but thank you for your kind words!!  walker: no need to thank me...it is a pleasure to share! thank you! J: hey...thank ya, m'friend...very cool comparison of my poem to a rainbow...I LIKE it...   Marge: thank you! I'm happy you like it! PK: well, thank you so much...I appreciate your flattering words...thanks for reading! Tier: why thank you, my friend...it is an honor that you would read this again...glad you liked! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I have to go into a rather long meeting in about 10 minutes and this put such a wonderful smile on my face that I can look forward to that meeting Thanx. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
With a kiss from the white tips of the eagle's wings, Love has found a home within the wonderment your verse brings. Beautiful use of imagery and nature to toss us a true showcase of your ever amazing talent and it goes without saying that your use of the language is always a treat to read and explore. Well done my sweet friend. Now don't go forgetting us little ones when you reach that pinacle of poetic society that finds you in the mix of a more tasteful view than from the dusty britches of a lost cowboy. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
such excellent imagery sp. . . I always love the way that you use it with such wonder in your writing. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
K, your imagery is off the charts with this one, just splended my friend!! so awesome to see your name today and read your lovely work. such a delight, as i don't get around here much anymore these days...i'll be in touch. take care of you and again, beautiful write! take care. aims ~~~~~ "but i see your true colors, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
BUMP  "but i see your true colors, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
absolutely lovely and that opening line was so stunning I almost missed some of the rest, I said almost. A light and lovely peace in this piece. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
(sorry about the delay again...  )Interloper: well, I understand boring jobs...so, I am especially glad I could help! thank you for the opportunity!  M: "in the mix of a more tasteful view than from the dusty britches of a lost cowboy" WHAT??? First of all, what could possibly be more tasteful??...poetic society just sounds so stuffy...ack...and, lost? don't think so...but, I will say thank you, m'friend, for your sweet compliments...coming from Mr. Imagery himself, it means a LOT...   Sven: well, thank you for the compliment...I am glad you enjoyed! Aims: hey girlie...it's good to see you around here, too! and on my post... ...thank you, m'friend...ttys! -e ~~~~~Aims again: always 'preciate a bump! VAS: well, I am glad you didn't miss it...and thank you so much for your reply! glad you liked! sp it was love that first drew me, |
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