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heavens_angel_01
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since 2001-07-28

Posts 2

0 posted 2001-07-29 02:58 PM

The first time I saw you I knew that you were different,
different from all the rest.
I tried to get you to notice me, but to you I was no one.
And when I saw you with her.. well it broke my heart
and the pain hurt so bad.
That is a pain I never wish to feel again.
We both did stupid things, just to impress our friends.
But deep down inside of me I guess... I love you.
I think of how it would be if we were together
and just having you by myside.
But I know that could never be,
I only wish you could feel the way I do.
Maybe then you would understand the way I feel.
I love everything about you, in my eyes you are perfect
no matter what.
I have tried to move on,
but no other guy makes me feel this way and no other will.
So with these last words I will not say goodbye,  but till we meet again.
So till we meet again I wish you the best,
and I hope you know that in my heart you will always be.

[This message has been edited by heavens_angel_01 (edited 07-31-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-07-29 03:57 PM

Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-07-29 05:33 PM

If it is truly meant to be, then it shall no matter what else happens in life. Very honest writing from the heart, I like that.

Welcome to Passions!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

3 posted 2001-07-29 06:15 PM

Welcome to Passions, and what a passionate piece to start with. How wonderful that you hold hope in your heart for that is a sign of a lovely person.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Snooganzmeister32
Member

since 2001-07-17

Posts 67
Cali, USA

4 posted 2001-07-29 06:32 PM

*sighs* Oh, my goodness! That is SOOO beuatiful! I've felt like that before, its horrible. It was very nice to come back in the message board after a few weeks and having this be the first poem I read. Its wonderful, dear. I cant wait to hear from you again. *hugglez 4 u*

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

5 posted 2001-07-29 11:38 PM

Welcome to passions!
This is nicely done and has such feeling...thanks
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-07-30 06:58 PM

ah yes. . . unrequited love. . . the worst of all. . . you show it here in all its pain and feelings of loss. . .

well done. . . and welcome!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

7 posted 2001-07-30 07:07 PM

You put a lot of feeling into your poem and that's a sign of a loving person.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

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