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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-07-23 03:35 PM


I dedicate this poem to my friend Grey Wolf
who inspired me to write this one.
Thank you for giving me such a warm friendship.





Friendship.

If I could paint friendship
I would use colours of love
warm reds beside tender blues
serene white aside lovely pinks
black of darkness lightened up
by the brightness of yellow accords

See this colourful palette
ready to create
open vision
without
fear
freely
to share
to take care
just being a friend
which is coloured by love

Charisma
~*TMP*~
22/07/01




[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 07-24-2001).]

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Nate Dogg
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1 posted 2001-07-23 03:40 PM


I like this Charisma and I know your friend will appreciate this.....write on, my sista....fabulous poem!!  

Nathan

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2 posted 2001-07-23 03:49 PM


and the portrait you painted here... is quite lovely...


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-07-23 03:55 PM


"to share...to take care"
this poem really pulled me into its softness...James

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4 posted 2001-07-23 03:56 PM



Charisma-
   This is so beautiful..
   Isn't friendship wonderful!  

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2001-07-23 05:38 PM


You paint friendship in such a wonderful way and of course you always pen a winner.  This is a wonderful gift of friendship you offer and I am sure Grey Wolf is ecstactic.  
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6 posted 2001-07-23 05:41 PM


Just beautiful ... and I like your pallette
Charisma
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7 posted 2001-07-23 05:55 PM



Nate: thank you my brother for your kind comment.   Glad you liked it.

Cpat: thank you for the lovely  

James:softness of warmth I guess Glad that you came by.

Vicky: yes friendship is beautiful....glad to see you around.

Mark: what a very pleasant suprise to see your name here....I have missed you my friend. And thank you for your lovely comment, so glad that you liked it. ((hugs))

Interloper: I think we all have a palette with frienship colours that we treasure...right? ...Glad that you liked my colours  

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8 posted 2001-07-23 06:01 PM


I really like this Charisma! It has such sentiment to it!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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9 posted 2001-07-23 06:30 PM


Charisma~
This entire piece is just soooooooo beautiful.
Your writing is the loveliest~
I simply adore the presentation of this~
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2001-07-24 10:32 AM


Charisma: Thank you, my friend, your poem has touched my heart. You have honored me thrice now, first with your friendship, second with your editorial request, and now with this beautiful poem. Your poetry is profond, thought provoking, and passionate. Keep up the good worh. Love, Greywolf
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11 posted 2001-07-24 10:49 AM


woooo hooooo! yoiu go girl! I enjoyed this wonderful poem immensely. Your heart is pouring out the beauty of love within!
hugs and then more hugs! Koko

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
Please Visit my new web-page
http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111

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12 posted 2001-07-24 02:45 PM



Cindi: great to know that you liked it, thanks for your kind comment.

Marge: Beautiful lady, I take it as a great compliment from you, and you know that I adore your wonderful poetry very much.
(((warm hugs)))

Greywolf: I am so glad that you like this little piece my dear friend. Your friendship was my inspiration to write this one, thank you for being such a wonderful inspiration.
  
  
KoKO: girlie sooooooooo good to see you, (((warm hugs))), thank you for your wonderful and ooooo sooo lovely comment.
Great to see you back among these blue lines.  

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 07-24-2001).]

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13 posted 2001-08-01 06:31 PM


This was really well done.  A tribute to our special friend.  Come and check my poetry page and escape pages, but please be gentle, I am not as great a writer as most of the people here.  Thanks for sharing your talents.  Dove Running (Rici) http://www.geocities.com/Hollywood/Interview/1120  come visit!


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14 posted 2002-03-14 10:54 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of friendship always bring a smile to my face and color our hearts with watercolor smiles! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so uch, sweet friend, this is enchanting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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15 posted 2003-01-12 04:56 AM


beautiful!
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