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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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He said he wants to touch the love He sees burning in my eyes He wants to feel the passion I refuse to disguise He wants to know the touch He can feel across the room He says it’s all he thinks of A slow building consume He says he’s never known A need quite like this He wants to taste the sweetness Of my honeysuckle kiss He says things quietly……. Whispering them in my ear Softly cooing lovely words While holding me so near He asks me what I think Of his love and adore And with a wicked smile I say, “husband…… I want you more”……. ~SEA~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah a lovely write SEA... and it seems both of you are very lucky to have found each other... I enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
As it should be  Finally fixed :) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
More...leads to most...and quite often, at that! One lucky husband... one beautiful wife! Can't even think of stopping a combo like that. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
He said he wants to touch the love He sees burning in my eyes He wants to feel the passion I refuse to disguise He wants to know the touch He can feel across the room He says it’s all he thinks of A slow building consume ================================ Have Mercy...  well..me thinks the meatloaf is gonna BURN BABY BURN  LOLVERY NICEY AND SPICEY SEA... once again hubby brings out the best in your muse... this is a very cool(hottie)write |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I enjoyed this very much! You're a lucky couple. |
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Savanna New Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 6 |
What a beautiful poem. I really enjoy your work, and look forward to reading alot more. Keep up the great work! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much...... |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Very, very, very, very, very....nice. *S* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
aw....this is the way it SHOULD be! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Awwwwwwwww !  How sweet this sounds~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A very lucky man, my friend, and such a sweet poem. (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
one can tell he did not stay across the room for long  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
don't mind me. . . I think that I'll just stand here silently and whisper "wow. . ." this is so intensely passionate and. . . "wow. . . " ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hootie read just about describes it... being a lonely single, i'm almost envious |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Sea, My husband and I have a saying "Let's burn the house down!" I think you are there! Great One! Sincerely, Regina |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It is a treasure to read of your love and passion of the man that you share your life with as it inspires us and reassures us that "true love" does exist. Wonderful writing there girlie. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very nice SEA, let love flow. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you guys are wonderful thank you |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Geez, SEA, you keep giving him these poems, you got him for the rest of your days, panting...very gentle smile |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may he always give you all your heart desires and fill your heart with happiness forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is enchanting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You and your poems including the word honeysuckle. Coolness. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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