Open Poetry #15 |
Crossing Heavens Door… (a sonnet recital for Wilfred) |
Parker Member Elite
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SEA
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Posts 22676with you |
Hey handsome this is a wonderful tribute to WY I liked this very much my friend hugs to you |
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Victoria
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This is so beautiful..i wish he could have seen this..maybe he will Parker..hugss..he would of been so touched..i know i am.. ~Victoria~ |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Parker, this took much thought and care, much wisdom place here...know that he is smiling... and applauding... well done, Sir... |
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Parker Member Elite
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Well, I hope he is smiling and not counting cause my syilible count is off on two lines. and I don't want to change the recording. Sorry Bill. Parker |
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SEA
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it's what comes from the heart, not the count sweetie..... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Parker, this is so beautiful and touching, wow... I know he smiles in heaven Melissa~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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Your words at least will be Our guides tonight, Where ever they may lead, We ask not why? Away from our own fears where death takes life; Please take Us to a place where Poets don’t die! We’ll write and sing for poets, now gone, before, As you our Wilfred crosses heavens door. =============================== Syllable count or not...this is perfect... perfect and just,-- in its gift and in its intend... and it is reasons like this...that I have come to respect you so...as a poet, yes...but more so a friend and someone who I can trust without question. Beautiful poem, a wonderful tribute and a touching inspire... like I said ....Perfect love ya for this P-man... P for Pedestals jm Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely tribute to Bill, Park. Cor |
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Martie
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Parker--Bill hears this I'm sure..and it is as sweet as the poet who wrote it. Thank you for this. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes a very nice tribute even if I'm uncapable of hearing the reading. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
He was not such a perfectionist that he wouldnt have seen the love and beauty of this piece...than you so much Parker |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Geez, now I have to cry again! Amazing, Parker, just beautiful, endearing to all, and I prap Will could hear it. You read well, it certainly added to an already special piece. Sandra |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Bill may have left Earth's Plain, but his soul has taken this beautiful and heartfelt Sonnet with it. This is so wonderfully thoughtful of you James. I I'm positive that his family would be so grateful and truly honoured that such an incredible piece of poetry is dedicated to someone that they obiviously love very much. Extrodinary writing James. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Parker- This gave me goosebumps...absolutely beautiful. I'm have no doubt that he is smiling.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
============================================= And We, a tear drop in this dampened life ============================================= what a cool line..i much enjoyed this poem parker...cant wait to hear the recital a good friend you are to send this one on its way to our fellow poet.. hugs, g so many things i want to say to him..but i just placed a rose on his grave, and talked to the wind... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
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I miss that gentle, sweet poet..... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Of all your recitals, this one stands out to me. For it is from the heart and deserves another read. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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Martie
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Parker--I came back to listen as I have a new computer that actually has sound!! Your voice added to this poem brought new tears to my eyes and depth to the thought behind this poem. Hugs and thank you! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
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Martie, thank you.... he will be missed on these pages. Parker |
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