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Gathering Storms
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Gathering Storms |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Muted … Bowling ball On wooden alley Rumble of far off Thunder as it heralds The approach of yet Another storm, Greets my ears in Darkness pierced only By the dim flashbulb Strikes of lightening Hidden behind distant Clouds. Stumbling through This unlit mo(u)rning Of faith the indecisive Winds lack both Direction and speed. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
vivid and fascinating!! the pairing of storms and emotions, very apropos |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
you gathered this together very well indeed... kudos! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Great analogy: Muted … Bowling ball On wooden alley I wouldn't mind a good storm over here... they're a lot of fun when you're inside, warm and snuggling with a loved one... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
It’s all a matter of spins, Spinning as it crosses to pins, A bang then a roaring, Anticipated scoring, Then wiped, re-begin Seems when I cast The first is the same as the last, Too much or little spin, Taking out just the 7 or 10, But the games go very fast. Gloom |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
no scalars for you mo(u)rning takes the breath away life goes on in spite |
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