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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-07-11 06:30 PM

Such a love I have for romance
As I take my pen in hand
Emotions of love flow freely
As my heart now takes command

A masterpiece I will paint
From my palette of love
As I add some extra sparkle
To the brightest stars above

The flowers in the meadow
Will look more vivid to the eye
And the moon will look more radiant
Amongst the brilliant starlit sky

The sun will look more golden
As it melts across the sea
The colors of your love
Will look much brighter to me

As I look through my kaleidescope
And see many vivid shades of blue
Far out towards the horizon
I see a love boat made for two

How we'll sail the seas of love
Our mural now complete
Two hearts now beating in time
Neither one skipping a beat

Suetang

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

1 posted 2001-07-11 06:38 PM

Me thinks I have missed too much of your work! You have painted this picture well, take care!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-07-11 06:59 PM

A masterpiece indeed, sweet Sue...not only have I been missing your work? I've been MISSING you...

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2001-07-11 07:05 PM

Eddie
Thanks for reading this one and I'm glad you liked it. Take care....Sue

Serenity
It's so nice to hear from you and I must email you soon, I'm sorry I haven't done so sooner. Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-07-12 01:49 AM

Sue, very gentle smile, your imagery is beautiful and your words compliment it..Really do like this piece

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-07-12 02:47 AM

SueTang~

'The flowers in the meadow
Will look more vivid to the eye
And the moon will look more radiant
Amongst the brilliant starlit sky'

A full palette, indeed.
Just lovely imagery in your thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-07-12 08:30 AM

very lovely... nice imagery and flow..with gentle words.. I enjoyed!!

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

7 posted 2001-07-12 08:37 AM

Ah, Love's luxurious luster in whose light all is more beautiful.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2001-07-12 10:36 AM

Suetang - ah, most touching piece you have written. Enjoyed this very much...

BC

WhiteDragon
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 70
O-town, Fl

9 posted 2001-07-12 10:42 AM

WOW -Jeremy

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

10 posted 2001-07-12 10:48 AM

quite nice...i especially like:

The sun will look more golden
As it melts across the sea

flows rather smooth...nice job

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2001-07-12 05:46 PM

Thank you all for your lovely comments.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

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