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ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2001-07-21 02:01 PM

       Old photographs of lover's fondest moments.
       An Autumn stroll through colored leaves of romance.
       The kiss a look can bring,
       Oh, how I love these things,
       When I'm with you.

       A midnight sky with Nothern Lights a dancing.
       The frost king's art on sunlit windows prancing.
       A song two can sing,
       Oh, how I love these things
       When I'm with you.

       A seaside walk by lazy waves at sunrise.
       A gentle wine to warm the soul by firelight.
       Sidewalk cafes in spring,
       Oh, how I love these things,
       When I'm with you.

       A rattling wagon on a moonlight hayride.
       A sailboat sailing on the bay at twilight.
       An icecream sundae fling,
       Oh, how I love these things,
       When I'm with you.

       Celtrue2000@E3B1G9

                                 © Eric True

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-07-21 02:15 PM

very nice, I'm sure I missed it the first time so glad you're here again and that you posted this one

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2001-07-21 02:47 PM

Hi Eric..so glad to see your name...I've missed your poetry! Funny how love changes the way everything lookes..loved this reminder.

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

3 posted 2001-07-21 03:08 PM

Nice write the imagry is stunning.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-07-21 03:40 PM

A midnight sky with Nothern Lights a dancing.
       The frost king's art on sunlit windows prancing.
       A song two can sing,
       Oh, how I love these things
       When I'm with you.

       A seaside walk by lazy waves at sunrise.
       A gentle wine to warm the soul by firelight.
       Sidewalk cafes in spring,
       Oh, how I love these things,
       When I'm with you.
===========================

HEY YOU

Missed you my poetpal...
this poems feels like singing in the park...
or strolling a beach at sunset..or walking in a warm spring rain...
holding hands and enjoying lifes little pleasures.
Love the spirit and harmony in this E-babes.
Hope your not working too hard...gotta leave time to write some new tunes

jm

only you could give love that satisfies the soul...
see the darkness of my heart and still won't let me go.

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2001-07-21 04:10 PM

This is just so full of wonderful images and moments Eric ... I can't help but smile as I read throughout. Delightful sentiments, I really enjoyed this.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2001-07-21 05:41 PM

Repost or not it sure is nice to feel the music of your words flow over my spirit. I LOVE IT!!!

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2001-07-21 05:47 PM

Eric,
Such beautiful pictures of love you painted with your words with this piece, thank you.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

8 posted 2001-07-21 06:32 PM

Most enjoyable, even if vicarious, in this case, but we all have our own precious moments which this helped to trigger. Thanks, Eric. Good to see you back.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2001-07-21 07:43 PM

you make me want to walk the highest hills and find whiskers on kittens and snow on eyelashes....

yes...this is a keeper....

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

10 posted 2001-07-21 08:13 PM

I would love these things too. It does spring one forward to romantic things to do! I enjoyed this and it is beautifully scribed.
Sincerely,
Rwood

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2001-07-21 09:53 PM

liked it

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

12 posted 2001-07-22 12:05 PM

These things you've described so well I think I'd enjoy them alone but agree they'd be enhanced with a Loved one.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

13 posted 2001-07-22 01:04 AM

Eric...ok Im ready...come get me...this is lovely sweet poet man

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