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I Am...................................Alicat's Challenge
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I Am...................................Alicat's Challenge |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I am romantic and free I wonder why you aren’t here with me I hear the ocean’s rhyme I see destiny woven in time I want to know your melody I am romantic and free I pretend I don’t miss you I feel as though my heart were see-through I touch and hope that you feel I worry you won’t know my love is real I cry when I’m treated wrongly I am romantic and free I understand very little inside my heart I say you’ll never finish, if you never start I dream of a sultry tune I try not to easily swoon I hope you know you are a part of me I am romantic and free ~SEA~ "Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt." |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
SEA you may be romantic but we know that there is nothing "free". "I understand very little inside my heart I say you’ll never finish, if you never start" I do like the sound of these two lines. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
A challenge well met my friend.  Thankyou so much for the welcome home. I have been sneeking in from time to time to read...  I rarely show my face anymore for two reasons. Limited time and writer's block....AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH...lol |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
inot2B~ thank you Marilyn~ I'm so glad to see you back I hope you stick around....lots of inspiration lurking around these blue pages stay..... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Very sweetly done Sea |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA-- This is beautiful. You met the challenge very gracefully. Nicely done. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea wonderful piece my friend....and I love the I am form very much......Well done. Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I understand very little inside my heart I say you’ll never finish, if you never start I dream of a sultry tune I try not to easily swoon I hope you know you are a part of me I am romantic and free ============================= You forgot I am "the boogie woogie moderator" LOL this is a sincere and true poetic portrait of the Sea we know through your poetry. well done poetess groovy-gator  only you could give love that satisfies the soul... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Well my little fire fly just keep winken and bliken and I'm sure you'll get results. Enjoyed. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
SEA, this is a very sweet answer to the I Am challenge...and I really enjoyed the 'sultry tune/swoon' couplet. The work did stumble a bit, but that's to be expected with the structural format of the challenge. But, I'd say you handled it very well.  |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
SEA I love ur poetry because it always presents LOVE.......... Very nice poem full of rythm |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, you are gal Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, It's ashame you aren't free. LOL Beautiful as always. Well done, my friend. (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very romanticly written, just keep writing like that and you will not be free for long. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!Romantic perfection. I love it. You have written this tenderly from the heart. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Truth in poetic advertising..........WHAT NEXT???????? Wonderful write and done so with the honesty of your essence which makes it even more special. Loved it. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Hi Sea, This is very nice, I enjoyed the repeated theme, seems you met the challenge. *S* |
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