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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2001-07-21 12:44 PM



Hug me tonight
so tight
that I can bearly breathe
Make me feel your love
like never before
Make me forget
the images of you and her
Promise me things
that I want to hear
Don't let it rain in my heart
Love me tonight
so hard
and make me
love you like before.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-07-21 12:59 PM


To go back, even for a moment...before the images were set.  A wish easily related to.  
StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
2 posted 2001-07-21 03:57 PM


nice poem... envelops one of the sad realities of life no matter how much someone hurts you you just cant make ur feelings dissapear ...
RosePetal
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since 2001-08-26
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3 posted 2002-02-17 03:53 PM


i can feel the yearning in this one!

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-01-12 05:07 AM



JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-07-13 06:32 AM


Nice...James
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