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Freezer Burn
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I am frozen. Encased in the Frigid facts, with metabolism So slowed by The long exposure, I can no longer Rise from Hibernation To see new Sun Winter ends, I know… Or we simply Learn to embrace The temperature And cope with The day to day To day to day Of lessened light And layers Of protection We must wear. Living in Igloos May be survival But you have No windows To let in Light |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, I started to pick a line, or two, that struck me, but it lead to another one, or two, that hit a little harder, until I had almost copied the whole thing.... so I guess all of it likes me, and very well, indeed.... thank you for this! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
::::thudd:::: oh this one got me sigh... snow "Trace my body with your words |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cpat- Very 'cool'!  I like this alot!  ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sunshine: Pleased you enjoyed... Snow: If that thud was you falling..I can understand how you might trip over the things I leave lying around..and will try much harder to be careful... ( smiling) Thanks for the comment VL... Cool? a play on pun? ( laughing) Thanks for the comment! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...like a York Peppermint Patty, without the benefit of pleasure... I've felt this way before, but never put it to such a unique perspective -- I enjoyed this, Ron, and always love how the titles of your poems or integral to their overall meaning. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
I liked it much, here the gears grinding out what it means to me, their are so many different posiblities. I love poetry!!! Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love this one. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
in coming near August of this hemisphere, northern/western, it be hard to feel the cool of this, but if memory serves me, I think I've got it, you certainly did my chicken's got it often, burger, too, hope this feezer burn soon lets go of you frigid piece ice think is good brrrrrrrightly done! ok I'll stop FREEZE! |
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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
My shoot-from-the-hip interpretation is one of the question of ignorance versus knowledge. It strikes up a bit of a mental debate (which concluded quickly *L*) as to whether it would indeed be better to igloo oneself in from the light, and with it the cold, or to stand outside in the sun and let oneself feel the bitter bite as it comes. I am perhaps too much of a curious person, I suppose, but I can't ignore the light when I know it's there. Enjoyed this quite a lot. Thanks! Ted |
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