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Open Poetry #15

Horizons

missiechrissie
New Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 8
Boston, Ma. USA

0 posted 2001-07-19 08:06 PM

                   Looking out to
                         horizons far
                   Across the water
                        the curve of the earth
                        brings you closer.
                   Miles diminish....
                        waves and spray
                        deliver your touch and kiss
                     upon my windswept face.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-07-19 09:44 PM

In a few short, swift, strokes, you painted a complete picture...

well done!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-20 08:23 AM

nicely done...
concise, complete image and message

Good work!!

missiechrissie
New Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 8
Boston, Ma. USA

3 posted 2001-07-20 12:05 PM

Thank-you- this was a tough one to post, as it is very personal..
your input means alot!!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-07-20 01:11 PM

*sigh*

indeed, this is just like that splash. . . a memory. . . self-contained. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

5 posted 2001-07-20 07:56 PM

This is a very nice write...thank you for sharing it...I enjoyed the great image...

sp

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

6 posted 2001-07-20 08:00 PM

Very nice, I like it a lot.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

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