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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-07-11 03:24 PM

            “THROUGHT THE NIGHT”
                             by
                         Bill Charles
                            ~~~~
I wake during the darkness, you are by my side,
    a kiss melts, desire beckons me, breathless,
        tender into the warm summer’s night,
            as a fire burns, to know your closeness…

You I have known in dreams, now they are true,
    with a taste of tenderness, knowing,
        for when I’m touched, my being is
            seduced, and you become addicting…

Sweet is the passion of both,
    tight is this embrace, hearts together,
        melting, forever caring, as one,
            not to part, for another…

Sighs are deep, whispers of rapture,
    lips are parted, so alluring, and seductive delight,
        enticing high this ecstasy of two,
            through the night…
                         ~~~~

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-11 03:25 PM

Ah.. lovely poem and lovely feelings.. I enjoyed!!!

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-07-11 05:26 PM

where were all you romantic guys when I was looking? eh?

this is so sublime

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

3 posted 2001-07-11 05:44 PM

Bill ..."..though the night.." What a wonderful title and conclusion. Well done. Bob

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2001-07-11 10:11 PM

Love is in the air, and it feels good, as does this poem.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-07-12 10:14 AM

Lovely, passionate piece. Write on!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2001-07-12 10:24 AM

Cpat Hair - thank you for your kind reply...

VAS - I was right here, where were you? hehehe!

RMW - thank you for your words, they do mean a lot to me. I have also turned this one into a favorite song...

MARK - ah, love is in the air, and it does feel so very good... And thank you for coming by once again to read one of mine...

Interloper - the music that I wrote for this one is even more passionate, and I hope to continue writing even from the grave, if I can... Thanks for the kindness...

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2001-09-01 09:28 PM

Bill-
   *sigh*...this is lovely...and so romantic.
   Wonderfully written.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-09-01 09:31 PM

BillCharles~
Very nice ....
I'm just gonna follow Vicky around ...
she's uncovering some nice stuff~

You need to get back in here with some more poetry~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

9 posted 2001-09-01 09:46 PM

I'm following Vicky & Marge. You're uncovering some beautiful pieces here.

Beautiful love poem

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2001-09-02 08:27 AM

vlraynes - thank you for the lovely reply, as they inspire me to keep writing.

Marge Tindal - I'll be back in a jiffy. Just been so darn busy writing poems and then putting some of them to music. I need to quit work, as it's getting in the way of my free time.

Tracey - thanks for following Vicky & Marge around, as I enjoy all of the replies.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2001-09-02 08:34 PM

enjoy

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2001-09-02 08:47 PM

Always romantic Bill...very lovely indeed

~Victoria~

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

13 posted 2001-09-02 08:58 PM

Bill...soft, sweet, and warm is how I see this. Wonderful read.
alan

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

14 posted 2001-09-03 08:17 AM

vandana - thank you for coming by.

Victoria - nice to see you, and thank you for the reply.

Alan - thank you for the words, they are very kind.

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