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Drowning In Eyes of Beauty
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Drowning In Eyes of Beauty |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sparkling… Placid surface Reflecting tree line And sun Belies the death Lurking in its depth To those not breathing Such liquid form. How does beauty Such as yours Not Hold menace To all who fall Into the sea Of your Eyes? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CPatHair~ Wow ! Mesmerizing thoughts~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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missiechrissie New Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 8Boston, Ma. USA |
I love the undercurrents in this poem- excellent! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Reminds me (completely abstractly) of the lyrics to a traditional Russian folk song, "Dark Eyes", in terms of the mesmerization by the beauty and fear of the same "object of desire"... Again, VERY powerful imagery here. So, are you going to publish a book of your works, or what?? I claim dibs on the first signed copy. :-) -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
interesting... The sea of your eyes. I want a copy of that best seller!!! Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Yikes, those are some powerful eyes you're looking into!  You write so well...I always love your imagery! ~Krista  |
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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
I felt an exaggerated nervousness out of this piece. That exaggeration isn't necessarily unrealistic at all though, I have felt that irrational fear under the scrutiny of one I found beautiful. Provocative work. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*.....love the imagery within. Charisma |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty |
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